Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples. Several phrases are difficult to understand, such as “the call offer,” “first cup and visual,” and “play the female.” Use accurate activity-related vocabulary and connect your ideas with linking words such as “for example,” “also,” and “as a result.” Keep the answer to three or four clear sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities as a child. For example, my school encouraged us to join clubs, so I took part in a football club and an art class. I enjoyed both activities because they helped me make friends and become more confident.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion and explain why. The answer currently contains an incomplete sentence and unclear phrases, especially “because people we have opportunities there are the comments.” Add a specific benefit, such as discovering talents, gaining experience, or becoming more adaptable. Use a linking expression like “because” correctly and provide a brief example or result.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities because this helps them discover their interests and strengths. For instance, someone might try cooking, photography, or a new sport and find a talent they did not know they had. It can also make people more confident and adaptable.

× The main is the call offer many opportunities to learn activities.

✓ The main reason was that the school offered many opportunities to learn new skills.

The original sentence does not have a clear grammatical structure. It needs a subject, a linking verb, and a complete clause. The phrase the main is should be changed to the main reason was that, followed by a complete sentence.

× The main is the call offer many opportunities to learn activities.

✓ The main reason was that the school offered many opportunities to learn new skills.

The question asks about childhood, so the answer should mainly use the past tense. Was and offered are appropriate past-tense forms.

× For example, our school encourages students to join first cup and visual.

✓ For example, our school encouraged students to join different clubs and take part in various activities.

Because the student is describing school experiences as a child, encourages should be changed to the past-tense form encouraged.

× For example, our school encourages students to join first cup and visual.

✓ For example, our school encouraged students to join different clubs and take part in various activities.

The original sentence contains unclear and incomplete expressions after join. Use a clear parallel structure, such as join different clubs and take part in various activities.

× So I mean to play the female and we are doing very high comfortable and made some house more enjoyable.

✓ So I learned to play an instrument, and we felt very comfortable and made the activities more enjoyable.

The student is talking about past experiences, so mean and are doing should not be used in the present tense. Learned and felt correctly express past events.

× So I mean to play the female and we are doing very high comfortable and made some house more enjoyable.

✓ So I learned to play an instrument, and we felt very comfortable and made the activities more enjoyable.

High cannot be used to modify comfortable in this context. The natural expression is very comfortable. Also, enjoyable should describe a suitable noun, such as activities.

× So I mean to play the female and we are doing very high comfortable and made some house more enjoyable.

✓ So I learned to play an instrument, and we felt very comfortable and made the activities more enjoyable.

The original sentence combines several unclear clauses without a correct grammatical structure. Use a clear subject and verb in each clause and connect the clauses with and.

× Yes, I think people should try many different things and because people we have opportunities there are the comments

✓ Yes, I think people should try many different things because they have opportunities to discover what they enjoy.

And and because cannot be combined in this way. Because correctly introduces the reason, and it should be followed by a complete clause: they have opportunities to discover what they enjoy.

× Yes, I think people should try many different things and because people we have opportunities there are the comments

✓ Yes, I think people should try many different things because they have opportunities to discover what they enjoy.

People is a plural noun, so the correct pronoun is they, not we. The pronoun should refer clearly to people throughout the sentence.

× Yes, I think people should try many different things and because people we have opportunities there are the comments

✓ Yes, I think people should try many different things because they have opportunities to discover what they enjoy.

The original answer is a sentence fragment with several incomplete and incorrectly connected clauses. A complete answer needs a subject, a verb, and a logically connected reason.