Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
Thí sinh
No, I didn't have many opportunities to type up in new activities as a trial. I was a quite shy kid and my school didn't offer a lot of extracurricular options, plus my parents were usually busy with.
Giám khảo
Should people try as many different things as they can?
Thí sinh
Yes, I believe people should experiment with a wide range of activities because it broadens their horizons and helps them discover new interests and new strengths. Trying different things foster adaptability and creativity.
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答基本切题,并给出了害羞、学校活动少和父母忙碌等原因,但有明显的词语和语法问题。“type up in new activities as a trial”表达错误,应改为“try out new activities”或“take part in new activities”。“a quite shy kid”应改为“quite a shy kid”,“busy with”后面缺少宾语。建议用清晰的主题句直接回答,再用连接词补充一两个具体细节,并确保句子完整。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have many opportunities to try out new activities as a child. I was quite a shy kid, and my school didn’t offer many extracurricular activities. In addition, my parents were usually busy with work, so they didn’t have much time to take me to clubs or classes.
Should people try as many different things as they can?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,理由充分,词汇较丰富,逻辑也比较自然。不过,“Trying different things foster”存在主谓一致错误,应改为“Trying different things fosters”。为了让答案更具体、更有说服力,可以补充一个简短的个人或现实例子,例如尝试运动、音乐或志愿活动后发现新的兴趣。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I believe people should try a wide range of activities because this broadens their horizons and helps them discover new interests and strengths. For example, someone who tries volunteering or learning a musical instrument may develop better communication skills and become more adaptable. Trying different things also fosters creativity.
× No, I didn't have many opportunities to type up in new activities as a trial.
✓ No, I didn't have many opportunities to take part in new activities as a child.
“type up”表示“打字整理”,不符合“参加活动”的语境;“take part in”才是“参加”的固定搭配。另外,“as a child”与题目中的时间背景一致,比“as a trial”更合适。建议记住固定搭配“take part in + 活动”。
× I was a quite shy kid and my school didn't offer a lot of extracurricular options, plus my parents were usually busy with.
✓ I was quite a shy kid, and my school didn't offer a lot of extracurricular options. Plus, my parents were usually busy with work.
程度副词“quite”通常放在冠词之后、形容词之前,因此应说“quite a shy kid”,而不是“a quite shy kid”。此外,短语“be busy with”后面需要接名词;这里补充“work”使句子完整。
× I was a quite shy kid and my school didn't offer a lot of extracurricular options, plus my parents were usually busy with.
✓ I was quite a shy kid, and my school didn't offer a lot of extracurricular options. Plus, my parents were usually busy with work.
句末的“with”后面缺少宾语,导致句子结构不完整。“be busy with”必须接具体内容,例如“work”。另外,原句连接了多个完整分句,使用句号或适当的连接词可以让表达更清晰。
× Trying different things foster adaptability and creativity.
✓ Trying different things fosters adaptability and creativity.
“Trying different things”是动名词短语,整体作主语,视为单数,因此谓语动词要用第三人称单数形式“fosters”,不能用“foster”。建议先判断主语的核心;如果主语是一个动作或动名词短语,通常使用单数谓语。