Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant, well organized, and includes specific examples and a result. However, correct the grammar and word choice: say “take part in races,” “cultural events,” and “quiz competitions.” Avoid repeating “cultural,” use the past tense “helped,” and add a linking phrase such as “As a result.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I had many opportunities to try new activities when I was a child. For example, I took part in races, school sports, cultural events, and quiz competitions. These activities helped me build confidence, develop new skills, and become more comfortable working with others.

Gợi ý: You express a clear opinion and give reasons and an example, but the answer is unfinished, which weakens its effectiveness. Correct “recommend try” to “recommend trying,” and replace “trying to do sports” with “trying different sports.” Avoid hesitation and repetition such as “it was it is”; finish by explaining that people should explore different activities but focus on the ones they genuinely enjoy or do well.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities because this helps them discover their interests and develop new skills. For example, trying different sports or hobbies can show people what they are good at and make them more confident. However, after exploring several options, they should focus on the activities they genuinely enjoy or find most useful.

× I also joined educational activities like Quiz competition, which help me build confidence and learn new skills.

✓ I also joined educational activities like quiz competitions, which helped me build confidence and learn new skills.

Quiz competition should be plural because the student refers to educational activities in general. The phrase quiz competitions is also more natural in this context.

× I also joined educational activities like Quiz competition, which help me build confidence and learn new skills.

✓ I also joined educational activities like quiz competitions, which helped me build confidence and learn new skills.

The question asks about childhood experiences, so the answer should use the past tense. Help should therefore be changed to helped.

× Yes, when I was a child I had many opportunities to try new things such as taking parts in races, school sports and cultural cultural events also.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had many opportunities to try new things, such as taking part in races, school sports, and cultural events.

The fixed expression is take part in, not take parts in. Part remains singular in this expression, and in is the required preposition.

× So I would recommend try a variety but it was it is good to focus more on

✓ So, I would recommend trying a variety of activities, but it is also good to focus more on a few that you really enjoy.

Recommend is followed by a gerund, so try should be changed to trying. The phrase it was it is is incorrect; because this is a general recommendation, it should be it is. The original sentence is also incomplete, so a suitable object has been added after focus on.

× So I would recommend try a variety but it was it is good to focus more on

✓ So, I would recommend trying a variety of activities, but it is also good to focus more on a few that you really enjoy.

The original sentence contains a repeated and conflicting verb phrase, it was it is, and it ends with the incomplete phrase focus more on. The correction forms a complete sentence with two clearly connected ideas.