Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct the verb tense and grammar: use “grew up” instead of “grow up,” “extracurricular” instead of “extra curicular,” and “I spent most of my time” instead of “most of my time spent.” Also, use a linking word such as “As a result” to connect the limited access to your childhood activities. Avoid repeating “activities” too often.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have many opportunities to try new activities when I was growing up because extracurricular classes were not common in my area. For example, there were very few places offering piano or swimming lessons. As a result, I spent most of my free time playing outdoors with my cousins.

Gợi ý: State your opinion clearly and complete your answer with a reason and a specific example. The response is unfinished, and “as long as they can” is vague; explain that people should try different activities when they have enough time, money, or access. Avoid the fragment “doing exercises like swimming, activities outside their homes,” and remove the repetition in “It gives them it gives them.” Use linking words such as “because,” “For instance,” and “As a result.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try different activities whenever they have the time and opportunity. This allows them to discover their interests and develop new skills. For instance, someone might try swimming, cooking, or a team sport and eventually find a hobby they really enjoy. As a result, they may become more confident and open-minded.

× No, when I was a child, activities like piano or swimming lessons were not common when I grow up.

✓ No, when I was a child, activities like piano or swimming lessons were not common when I was growing up.

The sentence refers to a period in the past, so the verb should be in the past tense. Use was growing up instead of grow up. ID 5.

× So most of my time spent playing outside with my cousins.

✓ So I spent most of my time playing outside with my cousins.

The original sentence is missing a complete finite verb. Use spent with the subject I to form a complete past-tense sentence. ID 23.

× For example, doing exercises like swimming, activities outside their homes.

✓ For example, they can do activities such as swimming outside their homes.

The original phrase does not contain a complete subject-verb structure. Add the subject they and the modal verb can, followed by the base verb do, to make a complete sentence. ID 23.

× It gives them it gives them

✓ It gives them the opportunity to try new things.

The phrase repeats the subject and verb and is incomplete because gives them needs an object or complement. Use a complete structure such as It gives them the opportunity to try new things. ID 26.