Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and includes specific examples, such as participating in a competition and volunteering at a school. However, correct the verb tenses: use “looked after” and “helped me gain.” You can also improve the linking by explaining more clearly how these activities developed your leadership skills. Avoid repeating “experience” and keep the answer natural and concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities as a child. For example, I took part in a national competition and volunteered at a local primary school, where I taught and looked after younger children. As a result, I became more confident and developed stronger leadership skills.

Gợi ý: Your main idea is clear, but most of the supporting sentence is difficult to understand because of inaccurate word choices and grammar. Use the structure “as many different things as they can,” and give one or two clear reasons, such as gaining skills, discovering interests, or becoming more adaptable. Avoid unclear phrases like “strengthening news” and “gain a lot of proficiency, familiarity.” Organize the answer with linking words such as “because,” “for example,” and “as a result.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try as many different things as they can. This allows them to discover their interests and develop a wider range of skills. For example, trying different sports or hobbies can help people become more confident and adaptable. As a result, they may be better prepared for future opportunities.

× For example, I participated in a national competition and volunteered at a public primary school where I taught and look after children.

✓ For example, I participated in a national competition and volunteered at a public primary school where I taught and looked after children.

The sentence describes activities that happened in the past, so the verbs should be in the past tense. The past tense of look is looked. The verb taught is already correctly in the past tense. Keep the two verbs parallel: taught and looked after.

× This experience improved my leadership skills and help me gain valuable experience.

✓ This experience improved my leadership skills and helped me gain valuable experience.

The subject This experience refers to a past event, and the first verb, improved, is in the past tense. Therefore, the second verb should also be in the past tense: helped, not help.

× Yes, people should try many different things as they can because it's really helpful for example that team can't make their improvement, strengthening news gain a lot of proficiency, familiarity that can happen in future.

✓ Yes, people should try as many different things as they can because doing so is really helpful. For example, teams can improve their performance, strengthen their skills, and gain a lot of experience and knowledge that may be useful in the future.

The original sentence contains several incomplete and incorrectly connected clauses, which makes the meaning difficult to understand. Use a complete clause after because, and separate the example into a new sentence. In a list, use parallel verb forms: improve, strengthen, and gain. Organizing the ideas into clear clauses will make the answer easier to understand.

× Yes, people should try many different things as they can because it's really helpful for example that team can't make their improvement, strengthening news gain a lot of proficiency, familiarity that can happen in future.

✓ Yes, people should try as many different things as they can because doing so is really helpful. For example, teams can improve their performance, strengthen their skills, and gain a lot of experience and knowledge that may be useful in the future.

When speaking about teams in general, use the plural noun teams. The plural form agrees naturally with the pronoun their and with the general meaning of the sentence. Also, use clear plural nouns such as skills and ideas when referring to multiple areas of development.