Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Thí sinh

It's when I was a child I often have any opportunities to take part in new activities like hide and like working with some animals.

Giám khảo

Should people try as many different things as they can?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think people need to try as many different things because I think you need to learn a lot of things you haven't treated.

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Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在较多语法和表达问题。首先,应直接回答“有”或“没有”,并使用过去时,例如“when I was a child”和“I often had opportunities”。其次,“like hide”表达不清楚;如果想说“捉迷藏”,应使用“playing hide-and-seek”。“like working with some animals”也需要更自然地表达为“working with animals”。建议使用“有机会 + 具体活动 + 结果/感受”的结构,并加入连接词,使内容更完整。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I often had opportunities to try new activities, such as playing hide-and-seek and working with animals. For example, I once helped my grandparents look after their chickens, which was both interesting and memorable.

Should people try as many different things as they can?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,但存在重复和词语误用。句中“I think”重复出现,可以删去一次;“learn a lot of things you haven't treated”不符合英语习惯,应改为“learn things they have never experienced”或“discover what they are interested in”。建议先给出观点,再说明原因,最后补充一个具体结果或例子。同时注意使用“people should try...”与前文保持一致,避免过度重复“different things”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try as many different things as they can. This allows them to learn new skills and discover what they are truly interested in. For example, trying a new sport or joining a club can help people become more confident and meet new friends.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× It's when I was a child I often have any opportunities to take part in new activities like hide and like working with some animals.

✓ When I was a child, I often had opportunities to take part in new activities, like hiding and working with some animals.

原句以“It’s when...”开头,句子结构不完整且不自然。这里直接使用“When I was a child”作时间状语即可。建议避免使用“It’s when...”来引导普通时间从句。

5: Past tense issue(过去时态错误)

× It's when I was a child I often have any opportunities to take part in new activities like hide and like working with some animals.

✓ When I was a child, I often had opportunities to take part in new activities, like hiding and working with some animals.

“When I was a child”表示过去时间,因此主句中的“have”也应使用过去式“had”。描述过去的经历时,要确保相关动词保持过去时。

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers(数量词使用错误)

× It's when I was a child I often have any opportunities to take part in new activities like hide and like working with some animals.

✓ When I was a child, I often had opportunities to take part in new activities, like hiding and working with some animals.

“any”通常用于否定句或疑问句。原句是肯定句,表达“有一些机会”,所以应使用“opportunities”,或使用“some opportunities”。

8: Verb + -ing form(动词后接-ing形式错误)

× It's when I was a child I often have any opportunities to take part in new activities like hide and like working with some animals.

✓ When I was a child, I often had opportunities to take part in new activities, like hiding and working with some animals.

“like”表示“喜欢或例如”时,后面连接并列活动,动词形式应保持一致。前面的“working”是-ing形式,因此“hide”应改为“hiding”,形成“hiding and working”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Different— Dissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
New— Recently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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