Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did have several opportunities to discover myself and find out my new interests or talents.

Giám khảo

Should people try as many different things as they can?

Thí sinh

They definitely should try as much as it possible. I mean if you will not try it then how can you discover yourself, your your potential

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Part 1

Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question more directly by naming at least one specific activity. “Discover myself” is understandable but slightly unnatural in this context, and “find out my new interests” should be changed to “discover new interests.” Add a brief result or example to make the answer more specific and engaging.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I had the opportunity to join a school drama club and take swimming lessons. These activities helped me discover that I was quite confident on stage and enjoyed learning new skills.

Should people try as many different things as they can?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Express your opinion directly and use the correct structure: “They should try as many different things as possible.” Avoid “as much as it possible,” “if you will not try it,” and the repeated word “your.” Support your opinion with a clear reason and a specific example, using linking words such as “because” or “for example.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try as many different things as possible because this is how they discover their strengths and interests. For example, someone might try painting, public speaking, or a new sport and realize that they have a natural talent for it. Even if they do not enjoy the activity, they can still learn something from the experience.

Ngữ pháp

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers

× They definitely should try as much as it possible.

✓ They definitely should try as many different things as possible.

Things is a countable plural noun, so many must be used instead of much. The correct structure is as many + plural countable noun + as possible. Do not include it in this structure.

7: Future tense issue

× I mean if you will not try it then how can you discover yourself, your your potential

✓ I mean, if you do not try them, how can you discover yourself and your potential?

In a first conditional sentence, use the present simple after if, not will: if you do not try. The main clause can use can to describe the possible result. Practice the pattern if + present simple, ... can/will + base verb.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× I mean if you will not try it then how can you discover yourself, your your potential

✓ I mean, if you do not try them, how can you discover yourself and your potential?

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to different things, so the plural pronoun them is needed. Also, your is unnecessarily repeated before potential. Check whether a pronoun agrees with the noun it replaces, and avoid repeating possessive pronouns.

26: Sentence structure errors

× They definitely should try as much as it possible. I mean if you will not try it then how can you discover yourself, your your potential

✓ They definitely should try as many different things as possible. I mean, if you do not try them, how can you discover yourself and your potential?

The phrase as much as it possible is not correctly structured; use as many different things as possible. The second sentence also needs commas to separate the introductory phrase and a question mark at the end. In addition, connect the two objects with and instead of repeating your.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

New— Recently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
Possible— Feasible; Conceivable; Potential
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