Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Thí sinh

No, I don't have any addictivity when I try because I am I am still home every day and don't go outside.

Giám khảo

Should people try as many different things as they can?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think I think people every people Paul go to try everything new thing and two

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Part 1

Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 回答基本没有直接说明“小时候是否有机会参加新活动”,而且“addictivity”用词错误,可能想表达“activities”。“I am still home every day”时态和表达不自然,应使用过去时描述童年经历。建议先直接回答,再补充具体原因和例子,并使用 because、so 等连接词。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have many opportunities to try new activities as a child because I usually stayed at home. My parents were quite busy, so I rarely went outside or joined clubs. I mostly spent my free time watching TV and playing with toys.

Should people try as many different things as they can?

Điểm: 15.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达不完整,重复使用“I think”,并且“people every people Paul go to try everything new thing”语法和词汇都不清楚,导致意思难以理解。建议先明确表明观点,然后用一个理由和一个具体例子支持观点;不必说“try everything”,可以说“try a wide range of activities”,使表达更准确自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try a wide range of activities whenever possible. This can help them discover their interests and develop useful skills. For example, someone who tries photography or cooking may find a new hobby that they really enjoy.

Ngữ pháp

5:Past tense issue(过去时态错误)

× No, I don't have any addictivity when I try because I am I am still home every day and don't go outside.

✓ No, I didn't have any opportunities to try new activities because I stayed at home every day and didn't go outside.

问题中的经历发生在过去,因为考官问的是“小时候”。因此,have 应改为 had,am 应改为 was 或使用 stayed,don't go 应改为 didn't go。回答过去经历时,要保持整句话使用过去时。

4:Modal verb usage(情态动词使用错误)

× Yes, I think I think people every people Paul go to try everything new thing and two

✓ Yes, I think people should try as many new things as they can.

表达“人们应该尝试……”时,需要使用情态动词 should,后面接动词原形 try。不要使用 go to try 来代替 should try。

1:Singular and plural issue(单复数错误)

× Yes, I think I think people every people Paul go to try everything new thing and two

✓ Yes, I think people should try as many new things as they can.

在 as many ... as 的结构中,many 后面必须接可数名词复数,因此 thing 应改为 things。表示“许多不同的事物”时,也应使用复数形式。

26:Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× Yes, I think I think people every people Paul go to try everything new thing and two

✓ Yes, I think people should try as many new things as they can.

原句中 people、every people、Paul、go to try 等成分排列混乱,缺少清晰的主语、情态动词和完整谓语结构。可以使用“主语 + should + 动词原形 + 宾语”的结构,使句子完整、清楚。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

New— Recently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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