Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly in the past tense and explain one specific activity. Use accurate grammar, such as “When I was a child, I had the opportunity to learn dancing,” rather than switching between present and past tense. Explain why you enjoyed it or how it helped you, and avoid repeating words such as “future” and “activities.” Organize your response with a clear topic sentence and a linking word such as “because” or “as a result.”

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child, I had the opportunity to learn dancing. I really enjoyed it because it was a fun way to express myself and stay active. As a result, I became more confident and developed an interest in performing.

Gợi ý: State your opinion clearly and use the correct structure: “People should try as many different activities as they can.” Then give one or two logical reasons and a specific example. Avoid unclear phrases such as “teach teach training them all tracks and business” and make sure pronouns and verbs are grammatically complete. Use linking words such as “for example” and “also” to connect your ideas; keep the answer within three or four sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities whenever possible. This helps them discover their interests and develop useful skills. For example, someone might try sports, music, or a business course and eventually find a career they really enjoy.

× Yes when I was a child I am a good dancer it is a very helpful for my future go future goal and very activities so when I

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I was a good dancer. It was very helpful for my future goals and gave me experience in many activities.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Change am to was and is to was because these events happened in the past.

× Yes when I was a child I am a good dancer it is a very helpful for my future go future goal and very activities so when I

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I was a good dancer. It was very helpful for my future goals and gave me experience in many activities.

The phrase future goal refers to more than one possible aim, so future goals is more appropriate. Also, activities is plural because the answer refers to several activities.

× Yes when I was a child I am a good dancer it is a very helpful for my future go future goal and very activities so when I

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I was a good dancer. It was very helpful for my future goals and gave me experience in many activities.

Do not use the article a before the uncountable adjective phrase very helpful. The correct form is It was very helpful, not It was a very helpful.

× Yes when I was a child I am a good dancer it is a very helpful for my future go future goal and very activities so when I

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I was a good dancer. It was very helpful for my future goals and gave me experience in many activities.

The original response joins several incomplete ideas without appropriate punctuation or connecting words. Separate the ideas into complete sentences with a subject and a verb.

× Yes people should try as many different activities they can teach teach training them all tracks and business etc They people are

✓ Yes, people should try as many different activities as they can, such as teaching, training, the arts, and business.

The expression is as many activities as they can, not as many activities they can. The ending They people are is incomplete and should be removed or replaced with a complete clause.

× Yes people should try as many different activities they can teach teach training them all tracks and business etc They people are

✓ Yes, people should try as many different activities as they can, such as teaching, training, the arts, and business.

After such as, use parallel noun or gerund forms when listing activities. Teaching and training are the -ing forms that function as activity names.