Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答基本直接，但存在明显的语法和表达问题。“when I'm child”应改为“when I was a child”，“usually do write”应改为过去时“usually wrote”。“write backs”含义不清，如果你想表达“写博客”，可以说“write blogs”；如果是其他活动，应使用准确的词。建议补充一个具体细节，例如在哪里进行、多久做一次，以及你为什么喜欢这些活动。

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child, I often wrote blogs and took photos. I usually did these activities at home or when I went out with my family. As a result, I became more creative and developed an interest in photography.

Gợi ý: 观点是明确的，但句子结构不完整、重复使用“help people”，并且有较多犹豫和自我修正。可以用完整的主题句直接回答，例如“Yes, I think people should try different things.”随后使用“because”连接理由，并准确表达“make them happy”和“increase their chances of getting a good job”。建议加入一个具体例子，使答案更自然、更有说服力。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try as many different things as they can. This allows them to discover their interests, improve useful skills, and become more confident. For example, someone who tries volunteering may develop communication skills that help them find a better job later.

× Yes, when I'm child I usually do write backs and take photos.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I usually wrote books and took photos.

题目询问的是童年时期的经历，因此应使用一般过去时。应将“I'm”改为“was”，将“write”改为“wrote”，将“take”改为“took”。回答过去经历时，要注意句中的主要动词都使用过去式。

× Yes, when I'm child I usually do write backs and take photos.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I usually wrote books and took photos.

“child”是可数名词单数，前面需要使用不定冠词“a”，所以应说“a child”，不能说“I'm child”。

× Yes, uh, people try different things can help people, uh, improve their skills and uh help them to uh make M make their happy and uh help to get good job.

✓ Yes, trying different things can help people improve their skills, make them happy, and help them get a good job.

“people try different things can help...”中，两个完整的动词结构直接连接，句子结构不正确。这里“尝试不同的事情”是句子的主语，应使用动名词短语“trying different things”。

× Yes, uh, people try different things can help people, uh, improve their skills and uh help them to uh make M make their happy and uh help to get good job.

✓ Yes, trying different things can help people improve their skills, make them happy, and help them get a good job.

“their happy”中的“their”是物主限定词，后面通常需要接名词；“happy”是形容词。这里需要使用宾格代词“them”，表示“使他们开心”，所以应改为“make them happy”。

× Yes, uh, people try different things can help people, uh, improve their skills and uh help them to uh make M make their happy and uh help to get good job.

✓ Yes, trying different things can help people improve their skills, make them happy, and help them get a good job.

“job”是可数名词单数，前面需要使用冠词。这里表示“一份好工作”，所以应说“a good job”，不能说“good job”。