Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Thí sinh

I have a protein basis to take part in your activities for example for example a basketball play

Giám khảo

Should people try as many different things as they can?

Thí sinh

Yes. We should time more since they were my high school.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 回答基本无法理解,主要问题是词汇和句子结构使用错误,例如“protein basis”和“your activities”与问题语境不符。应先直接回答“有”或“没有”,然后说明参加过的具体活动、时间和原因。避免重复“for example”,并使用过去时来描述童年经历。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities as a child. For example, I joined a basketball club when I was ten. I enjoyed it because I could exercise and make new friends.

Should people try as many different things as they can?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 回答虽然表达了肯定态度,但第二句“we should time more”和“since they were my high school”语法和意思不清楚。应先明确说明为什么人们应该尝试不同的事情,再补充一个具体例子或结果。可以使用“because”“for example”或“as a result”等连接词,并注意主谓一致和时态。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities. This is because they can discover their interests and develop useful skills. For example, a student might try volunteering, sports, or learning a musical instrument before choosing what they enjoy most.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue; 8: Verb + -ing form; 12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× I have a protein basis to take part in your activities for example for example a basketball play

✓ I had an opportunity to take part in new activities, for example, playing basketball.

题目询问的是童年时期的经历,所以应使用一般过去时,将“have”改为“had”。“your activities”中的“your”指代不正确,应改为与题目一致的“new activities”。在“for example”后举例说明活动时,应使用动名词形式“playing”,而不是“play”。此外,重复的“for example”应删除,并在举例前后使用逗号。

5: Past tense issue; 12: Incorrect use of pronouns; 16: Incorrect conjunction use; 6: Present tense issue

× Yes. We should time more since they were my high school.

✓ Yes. We should try more things when we are in high school.

“time more”不能表达“尝试更多事情”的意思,应改为“try more things”。这里谈论的是人在高中时期应该做什么,因此使用一般现在时“are”更合适。“they”没有明确的指代对象,应删除。表示“当……时”应使用“when”,而不是不合适的“since”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

High— Tall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
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