Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think I has a lot of opportunities to take back in new activities when I was a child, like I can to learn swimming and singing and painting.

Giám khảo

Should people try as many different things as they can?

Thí sinh

Absolutely, I thought people should tried everything she they can tried because I think people should learn new things until old.

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Part 1

Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答的主要意思清楚,也提供了游泳、唱歌和画画三个具体活动,但存在较多语法和搭配错误。首先,描述过去经历应使用过去时,例如将“I has”改为“I had”,将“can”改为“could”。其次,“take back in”不是正确搭配,应使用“take part in”或“try”。此外,列举活动时应使用平行结构,如“learn to swim, sing and paint”。建议先直接回答,再补充一个具体细节或结果,使答案更自然、更完整。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had plenty of opportunities to try new activities when I was a child. For example, I learned to swim, sing, and paint at different classes. I particularly enjoyed painting because it allowed me to express my creativity.

Should people try as many different things as they can?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了明确观点,但语法错误较多,影响了准确性和自然度。谈论一般观点时,应使用“people should try”,而不是“people should tried”;“she they”应删除;“until old”表达不完整,可以改为“throughout their lives”。此外,“try everything they can try”重复,应改为“try as many different things as possible”。建议加入一个清晰原因和具体结果,例如尝试新事物可以培养技能、发现兴趣或增强自信。

Ví dụ: Absolutely. I think people should try as many different things as possible because they can discover their interests and develop new skills. For instance, trying a new sport or learning a musical instrument can make life more enjoyable. People should continue learning throughout their lives.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, I think I has a lot of opportunities to take back in new activities when I was a child, like I can to learn swimming and singing and painting.

✓ Yes, I think I had a lot of opportunities to take part in new activities when I was a child, like learning to swim, sing, and paint.

“When I was a child”表示过去时间,因此应使用过去时“had”,不能使用“has”。建议看到明确的过去时间标志词,如“when I was young”或“last year”,就检查句中的动词是否需要使用过去式。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, I think I has a lot of opportunities to take back in new activities when I was a child, like I can to learn swimming and singing and painting.

✓ Yes, I think I had a lot of opportunities to take part in new activities when I was a child, like learning to swim, sing, and paint.

固定搭配是“take part in”,表示“参加”。“take back”通常表示“收回”或“拿回”,不表示“参加”。建议记忆固定搭配:take part in an activity。

4: Modal verb usage

× Yes, I think I has a lot of opportunities to take back in new activities when I was a child, like I can to learn swimming and singing and painting.

✓ Yes, I think I had a lot of opportunities to take part in new activities when I was a child, like learning to swim, sing, and paint.

情态动词后面必须接动词原形,不能使用“can to learn”。此外,因为句子描述的是童年时期的能力或机会,使用“could learn”更合适。也可以改成“learning to swim, sing, and paint”,使句子结构更自然。

4: Modal verb usage

× Absolutely, I thought people should tried everything she they can tried because I think people should learn new things until old.

✓ Absolutely, I think people should try everything they can because I think people should learn new things until they are old.

情态动词“should”后面必须接动词原形,所以“should tried”应改为“should try”。同样,“can”后面也必须接动词原形,因此“can tried”应改为“can try”。建议记住结构:should/can/must + 动词原形。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Absolutely, I thought people should tried everything she they can tried because I think people should learn new things until old.

✓ Absolutely, I think people should try everything they can because I think people should learn new things until they are old.

“People”是复数名词,指代它时应使用复数代词“they”,不能使用“she”。“she they”是两个代词重复和混用。建议先确定先行词的单复数:people对应they,a person对应he、she或they。

26: Sentence structure errors

× Absolutely, I thought people should tried everything she they can tried because I think people should learn new things until old.

✓ Absolutely, I think people should try everything they can because I think people should learn new things until they are old.

“until old”缺少主语和系动词,句子结构不完整。应改为“until they are old”,其中“they”指people,“are”是系动词。建议检查从句是否包含完整的主语和谓语。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
New— Recently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
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