Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Thí sinh

Do you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Giám khảo

Should people try as many different things as they can?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think so, because when we try new things, we can learn a lot different new things. We can improve our skills or ability to do something new.

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Part 1

Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答重复了考官的问题,没有真正回答自己童年时是否有机会参加新活动。应先直接回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”,然后补充具体活动、参加原因以及感受。注意时态:问题询问过去经历,因此应使用一般过去时,例如“Did you have”对应“Yes, I did”。回答可以控制在2—4句话,并使用“because”“for example”等连接词使内容更完整。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I had the opportunity to try swimming and drawing classes. I especially enjoyed swimming because it helped me become more confident and stay healthy.

Should people try as many different things as they can?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答观点明确,也提供了原因,但存在词汇重复和语法问题。“a lot different new things”应改为“many different things”或“a lot of new things”;“skills or ability”应改为“skills or abilities”。此外,第二句“improve our skills or ability to do something new”表达不够自然,可以说明尝试新事物如何帮助个人成长,并加入一个具体例子。建议使用“for example”“as a result”等连接词,让答案更具体、更有逻辑。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely, because trying different things helps people discover their interests and develop useful skills. For example, someone who joins a sports club may become more confident and learn how to work in a team. As a result, they may also find an activity they truly enjoy.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时态错误)

× Do you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

✓ Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

句子中的时间状语“as a child”表示过去,所以应该使用一般过去时。疑问句的过去时结构是“Did + 主语 + 动词原形”,因此将“Do”改为“Did”。建议看到“as a child”“when I was young”等过去时间表达时,使用一般过去时。

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers(数量词使用错误)

× Yes, I think so, because when we try new things, we can learn a lot different new things. We can improve our skills or ability to do something new.

✓ Yes, I think so, because when we try new things, we can learn a lot of different new things. We can improve our skills or ability to do something new.

“a lot”修饰可数名词复数或不可数名词时,通常需要使用“a lot of”,所以“a lot different new things”应改为“a lot of different new things”。建议记住结构“a lot of + 名词”,例如“a lot of opportunities”和“a lot of new skills”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Different— Dissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
New— Recently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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