Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答基本直接，但“when I was a child”前后缺少逗号，且“it’s meaningful for me”表达不够自然，也没有说明具体参加了哪些活动以及为什么有意义。建议使用过去时，先直接回答，再加入一个具体活动、原因和结果，并用“for example”或“because”连接细节。注意控制在2至4句话内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities when I was a child. For example, I joined a swimming club and took part in a school drama performance. These experiences helped me become more confident and taught me how to work with others.

Gợi ý: 观点明确，但“I think it must”用法错误，应改为“I think they should”或“I believe people should”。“do everything”过于绝对且不自然，也没有解释尝试不同事情如何帮助实现目标。建议先表达适度的观点，再给出原因或例子，并使用“because”或“however”增强逻辑。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities, especially when they are young. This allows them to discover their interests and develop useful skills. However, they do not need to do everything; they should focus on the activities that they genuinely enjoy.

× I think it must, everyone should try their best to do everything, to achieve their dreams.

✓ I think they should. Everyone should try their best to achieve their dreams.

这里回答的是“人们是否应该尝试不同的事情”，主语是people，因此应使用代词they，而不是it。情态动词should后面需要接完整的动词短语；“I think it must”结构不完整，且must不符合原句想表达的“应该”。另外，try their best to do everything表达不自然，可以改为try their best to achieve their dreams。

× I think it must, everyone should try their best to do everything, to achieve their dreams.

✓ I think they should. Everyone should try their best to achieve their dreams.

people是复数名词，所以后面应使用复数代词they，而不能使用单数代词it。回答时要确保代词的数与所指代的名词保持一致。

× I think it must, everyone should try their best to do everything, to achieve their dreams.

✓ I think they should. Everyone should try their best to achieve their dreams.

原句用逗号连接两个可以独立成句的部分，造成逗号拼接错误。可以将其拆成两个句子，也可以使用合适的连词连接。拆分后句子结构更清晰，表达也更自然。