Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 질문을 이해하지 못했을 때는 당황해서 멈추기보다 정중하게 다시 말해 달라고 요청하세요. 예를 들어 “Could you repeat the question, please?”라고 말한 뒤, 질문의 핵심인 어린 시절의 새로운 활동 경험을 간단히 답해야 합니다. 답변은 먼저 직접적인 주제문을 제시하고, 활동과 구체적인 경험을 한두 문장으로 덧붙이는 것이 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Could you repeat the question, please? Yes, I had the opportunity to try swimming when I was seven. I joined a local swimming class, and I really enjoyed learning new skills with other children.

Gợi ý: 의견을 분명하게 시작한 점은 좋지만, 문장이 끝나지 않았고 “the more people try, the better they can become” 뒤에 구체적인 설명이 필요합니다. “new information”은 이 문맥에서 “new knowledge”가 더 자연스럽고, “soft skills”는 복수형으로 사용해야 합니다. 또한 because 뒤에 완전한 절을 연결하고, 예를 들어 의사소통 능력이나 자신감을 어떻게 향상시키는지 구체적으로 설명하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try as many different things as possible. By doing so, they can gain new knowledge and develop useful soft skills, such as communication and teamwork. For example, joining a sports club can help someone become more confident and learn how to cooperate with others.

× I think there is a new information or soft skills that.

✓ I think people can gain new information and develop soft skills by trying different things.

Information is an uncountable noun, so it cannot be used with a. Also, the original sentence incorrectly uses there is with the plural noun soft skills. The sentence ends with an incomplete that-clause, so it should be completed or rewritten. Use there is with singular or uncountable nouns and there are with plural nouns.

× I think there is a new information or soft skills that.

✓ I think people can gain new information and develop soft skills by trying different things.

Information is an uncountable noun, so it does not take the article a. The correct form is new information, not a new information. Soft skills is plural and normally does not need an article when referring to skills in general.

× I think there is a new information or soft skills that.

✓ Yes, I think the more different things people try, the better they can become because they can gain new information and develop soft skills.

The original sentence is incomplete because that is not followed by a complete clause. It also combines ideas in an unclear way. Use a complete sentence with a clear subject and verb, such as they can gain and develop.