Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have the opportunity to take a new activity, for example, play badminton, play ping pong ball is very good for our body.
Giám khảo
Should people try as many different things as they can?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it's necessary for people to try different things when he was a cowdown. When Faith successful doing this little activity helped confidence and confidence. It goes for her future life.
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接和自然,先用一句主题句回应问题,然后用一两句具体细节支持。注意时态和主谓一致(过去谈童年应使用过去式),避免冗余。可以说明什么时候开始、和谁一起、学到什么,以及这些活动的好处。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child I joined my school's badminton and table tennis clubs. I started around age nine and practiced with friends twice a week, which improved my fitness and coordination. These activities were fun and helped me stay active.
Should people try as many different things as they can?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 要表述清晰并使用连贯的逻辑,避免语法错误和不明指代(如“he”、“Faith”不明确)。先给出明确观点,再用一到两句具体理由或例子支持,使用连接词如 'because' 或 'for example'。保持句子简短,控制在五句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe people should try different things because it helps them discover interests and build confidence. For example, trying a new sport or hobby can teach teamwork and resilience, which are useful later in life.
× Yes, I have the opportunity to take a new activity, for example, play badminton, play ping pong ball is very good for our body.
✓ Yes, I had the opportunity to try new activities, for example playing badminton and table tennis, which are very good for our bodies.
问题类型ID: 6(现在时错误)。原句中时态和动词搭配不当:面试问的是“as a child”(作为孩子),应该用过去时(had)。“have the opportunity to take a new activity”中动词搭配不自然,应使用“had the opportunity to try/take part in”。另外原句中用逗号连接多个动作导致句子结构混乱,应改为并列动名词形式“playing badminton and table tennis”。最后“play ping pong ball”不地道,改为“table tennis”;“is very good for our body”主语与谓语不一致且单复数问题,改为复数“which are very good for our bodies”。建议:注意根据时间点选择正确时态;使用自然搭配(have the opportunity to + do / try / take part in);并用并列结构连接多项活动;主谓在人称和数上一致。
× Yes, I think it's necessary for people to try different things when he was a cowdown.
✓ Yes, I think it's necessary for people to try different things when they were children.
问题类型ID: 2(第三人称单数问题)和12(代词使用错误)相关。原句时态不一致且代词使用错误:“people”是复数,应使用复数代词“they”而不是单数“he”。“cowdown”显然拼写错误,意图可能是“childhood”或“children”;根据语境应为“children”或“when they were children”。另外问答谈过去经历,保持过去时更自然。建议:复数主语用复数代词,检查拼写,保持时态一致。
× When Faith successful doing this little activity helped confidence and confidence.
✓ When someone successfully did this small activity, it helped build their confidence.
问题类型ID: 26(句子结构错误)。原句结构混乱且重复“confidence and confidence”,语法不连贯。应将原因状语和结果主句清晰分开:用时间状语从句“When someone successfully did this small activity”然后主句“it helped build their confidence”。注意动词形式“successful”应为副词或过去式动词“successfully did”或形容词短语“was successful in doing”。建议:理清从句和主句关系,使用正确的词性(副词修饰动词),避免重复。
× It goes for her future life.
✓ This applies to their future life.
问题类型ID: 12(代词使用错误)。原句中代词“her”与之前应使用的泛指复数“people/they”不一致,代词性数要一致。且“It goes for”表达不太自然,改为“This applies to their future life”更恰当。建议:保持代词在人称和数上的一致性,使用更常见表达(apply to)。