Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, sentence structure and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers directly, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct articles, plurals and verb forms (e.g., “I had many opportunities,” “there were various programs at my school,” “they gave students chances to perform”). Keep it natural and avoid fillers like “uh” or “umm.”

Ví dụ: Yes. I had many opportunities to try new activities as a child. For example, my school ran various clubs and annual talent shows, and teachers encouraged students to perform on stage, which helped me become more confident.

Gợi ý: Clarify your position and avoid contradicting statements. Decide whether you agree, then explain with 1–2 clear reasons using linking words (e.g., “However,” “For example,” “because”). Fix grammar (e.g., “I don't think people should try everything, but they should try some new things because ...”). Remove hesitations and keep to under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I don’t think people should try absolutely everything, but they should try some new things. For example, experimenting with different hobbies can develop useful skills and help you discover what you enjoy, so it’s worth trying a few new activities.

× Yeah, I got really opportunities to take part in a new activities as a child.

✓ Yeah, I had many opportunities to take part in new activities as a child.

The student used plural/singular forms incorrectly and an unsuitable verb. 'Opportunities' is plural so the correct verb is 'had' (not 'got really') and 'a new activities' mixes singular 'a' with plural 'activities'. Use 'many opportunities' and 'new activities' to match plurality and standard collocation. Suggestion: Use 'had many opportunities' or 'got many opportunities' and do not combine 'a' with plural nouns.

× Uh, there was very programs and umm in my school and they give very opportunities to the students to perform on stage and to become a confident student.

✓ There were many programs at my school, and they gave many opportunities to students to perform on stage and to become confident.

Multiple article and verb-number problems: 'there was' with plural 'programs' requires 'there were' (subject-verb agreement). 'Very programs' is incorrect; use 'many programs' for countable plural nouns. 'In my school' is better as 'at my school' (preposition choice). 'They give' should match past context 'gave'. 'Very opportunities' is wrong; use 'many opportunities'. 'A confident student' is unnecessary singular after plural context; use 'become confident' or 'become confident students'. Suggestion: Match verb tense and number (were/gave) and use 'many' for countable plurals; prefer 'at my school'.

× No, I don't think so that people try many different things as they can, but uh, in another way, they should try new things because of, uh, trying new things, your skill is very, your skill become very developed and, uh, good so.

✓ No, I don't think people should try as many different things as they can; however, they should still try new things because by trying new things, your skills become very well developed and improve.

Several grammatical issues: 'I don't think so that people try...' is ungrammatical — use 'I don't think people should try...'. 'Try many different things as they can' should be 'as many different things as they can' (comparison structure). 'In another way' is awkward; use 'however' or 'on the other hand'. 'Because of, uh, trying new things' should be 'because by trying new things' or 'because trying new things'. 'Your skill is very, your skill become very developed' has subject-verb disagreement and repetition; use plural 'skills' with verb 'become'. 'Very developed and, uh, good so' -> 'very well developed and improve' or 'become much better'. Suggestion: Use modal 'should' appropriately, correct comparison 'as many...as', use 'skills become' for plural agreement, and streamline connectors like 'however' and 'because'.