Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
Giám khảo
Should people try as many different things as they can?
Thí sinh
Should people treat as many different things as they can?
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题,未提供任何信息。根据评分标准,这样的回答既不自然也不符合基本结构。改进建议:在回答时先用一句主题句直接回应(比如“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”),然后用1–2句具体细节支持,句子之间用连接词如“because”或“for example”衔接。尽量保持答案不超过5句,并使用与话题相关的词汇如“sports, music classes, summer camps”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. For example, I joined a weekend soccer club and a piano class when I was eight because my parents wanted me to try different hobbies. These activities helped me learn teamwork and discipline.
Should people try as many different things as they can?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 你的回答依然只是重复或改写了考官的问题,未给出立场和支持性细节。改进建议:先明确表达个人观点(例如“Yes, they should”),然后用连接词如“because”或“for instance”提供1–2个具体理由或例子,注意词汇准确性(不要把“try”写成“treat”)。保持语言自然并控制在最多5句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try many different things because it helps them discover interests and develop new skills. For instance, trying a cooking class or volunteering can lead to lasting hobbies or career ideas.
× Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
✓ Yes, I did have opportunities to take part in new activities as a child.
学生原句完全复述了考官的问题,作为回答需要给出陈述句或简短回答(例如“Yes, I did”或“Yes, I did have opportunities…”)。这不是语法形式错误,而是句子结构与对话功能不符。建议:回答问题时使用完整的陈述或简短肯定/否定回答,而不是重复考官的问题。
× Should people treat as many different things as they can?
✓ Should people try as many different things as they can?
学生将动词“try”(尝试)误写为“treat”(对待/请客等),导致句意错误。根据题意应讨论“尝试不同事物”,正确动词是“try”。建议:注意常用动词的区分,遇到含义相近的词时确认搭配和语境;可通过造句练习加深记忆。