Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more grammatical: begin with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details with correct verb forms and specific info. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. For example, state which activities you tried, when or how you started, and what effect they had on you. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities as a child. For instance, I joined a school choir when I was eight, which sparked my love of singing and became an important part of my life. I also took dance classes for a few years, which helped me gain confidence and stay fit.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and organize your ideas: give a clear thesis, then two concise reasons with linking words and a brief example. Use correct verb forms and avoid filler phrases. Be specific about how trying new things develops a person (skills, confidence, perspective). Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do, because trying new things helps you develop useful skills and boosts your confidence. For example, learning a new sport taught me teamwork and perseverance, and trying different hobbies expanded my interests and made me more adaptable.

× Obviously, yes, I had a few activities which I take a participation.

✓ Obviously, yes, I had a few activities in which I took part.

Errors: 'take a participation' is incorrect collocation and tense. The student refers to past activities, so use past tense 'took' and the correct phrasal verb 'take part' (past: 'took part') or 'participate in'. Also use 'in which' or 'in' for correct preposition. Suggestion: say 'I had a few activities in which I took part' or 'I participated in a few activities.'

× There was a sink in certain horror choir and after that singing become a part of my life, important part of my life and also it was dancing.

✓ I sang in a local choir, and after that singing became an important part of my life; I also did some dancing.

Errors: 'There was a sink' is ungrammatical — 'sing' (verb) misused as noun; should be 'I sang' or 'I was a singer'. 'Certain horror choir' is likely wrong word choice; use 'local choir' or 'school choir'. 'Become' should be past tense 'became' to match past context. The sentence is run-on and unclear; split into two clauses and use correct articles. Suggestion: use clear subjects and past tense verbs: 'I sang in a school choir, and after that singing became an important part of my life. I also did some dancing.'

× Oh well, I think yes, because we living only one life and I think that more things you tried the more developed you get, because I think first of all it's develop your develop your like a person like you know, like a person who can be really motivated to do so.

✓ Oh well, I think so, because we live only one life, and I think the more things you try, the more developed you become. First of all, it develops you as a person, you know, someone who can be really motivated to do new things.

Errors: 'we living' lacks auxiliary and should be 'we live' (simple present). 'More things you tried' mixes past and conditional; use present simple for general truth: 'the more things you try'. 'You tried' → 'you try'; 'you get' → 'you become' for clarity and correctness. 'It's develop your' is ungrammatical; use 'it develops you' and 'as a person' for correct structure. Repetition 'develop your develop your' removed. Suggestions: use simple present for general statements, ensure subject-verb agreement (he/she/it develops), avoid repetitions, and break long sentences into clearer clauses.'