Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Thí sinh

No.

Giám khảo

Should people try as many different things as they can?

Thí sinh

Listen to you you say yes.

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Part 1

Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Điểm: 18.0

Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,未直接展开或说明原因。请用主题句直接回应,然后用1–2句补充细节(例如举例、说明原因或频率),并使用连接词使话语连贯。注意控制在最多5句内,语言自然。

Ví dụ: Not really. When I was a child, my parents were quite protective, so I mainly stayed close to home and rarely tried new extracurricular activities. For example, I only took piano lessons for a short time and never joined sports clubs, which limited my exposure to different experiences.

Should people try as many different things as they can?

Điểm: 22.0

Gợi ý: 回答不自然且语法有误,未直接给出明确立场或理由。请先用一句话明确表态,然后用1–2句支持理由或举例,并用连接词(for example, because, however 等)保持逻辑。保持语句自然流畅,避免口语化的重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try as many different things as possible because it helps them discover new interests and skills. For example, sampling different hobbies or jobs can reveal talents you didn't know you had and improve confidence when facing new challenges.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× No.

✓ No, I didn't.

原句只有“No.”,虽然在口语中可被理解,但回答应与问题时态一致并更完整。题问为过去时“Did you have... as a child?”,应使用过去时否定形式,如“I didn't”或“No, I didn't”来明确表示过去没有。建议在否定回答中使用完整助动词结构以符合书面与正式口语。

Incorrect conjunction use

× Listen to you you say yes.

✓ If you listen to me, I would say yes. / If you listen to me, I would say so.

原句“Listen to you you say yes.” 结构混乱,有重复“you”,且时态与从句关系不正确。根据考官问题“Should people try as many different things as they can?”,学生想表达“如果听我的话,我会说应该”,应使用条件句结构“If you listen to me, I would say yes.”(更礼貌/假设)或“If you ask me, I would say yes.”。中文建议:使用if引导的条件从句,主句用适当的情态或虚拟语气;避免重复主语并保持语序正确。

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