Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question and gives a personal example, but it needs clearer structure, correct grammar, and more concise wording. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add 1–2 supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and article use (e.g., “took me to swimming lessons” not “took two swimming classes”). Avoid redundancy and keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. When I was six my parents enrolled me in swimming lessons. At first I was scared because I had never been in deep water, but the instructor helped me gain confidence with simple exercises. Within a few weeks I felt much more comfortable and enjoyed swimming.

Gợi ý: Good opinion but the response is incomplete and contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Provide a clear topic sentence stating your view, then give 1–2 specific reasons linked with linking words (e.g., “because” or “for example”). Use correct verb forms and complete the final thought. Keep it concise and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try many different activities, especially when they are young, because that is when they can discover their talents. For example, trying sports, music or art can reveal interests and strengths, and these experiences can guide future choices.

× Yeah, when I was very young at the age of six my parents took two swimming classes and it was a little bit scary at the first time because I never had an experience of going deep into water.

✓ Yeah, when I was very young, at the age of six, my parents took me to two swimming classes, and it was a little bit scary at first because I had never had the experience of going deep into the water.

Errors: missing object after 'took' (should be 'took me to'), incorrect article/phrase 'at the first time' (should be 'at first'), and incorrect past perfect use for a prior experience (use 'had never had' to show lack of experience before the classes). Also add 'the' before 'water' for specificity. Suggestion: include the direct object for 'took', use 'at first' for initial reactions, and use past perfect when referring to an experience that did not occur before a past time point.

× Yeah, in my opinion people should try different things, especially at the young age since you don't know where your talent and you could at it.

✓ Yeah, in my opinion people should try different things, especially at a young age, since you don't know where your talent lies and you could be good at it.

Errors: missing verb after 'talent' (should be 'lies') and incorrect modal/verb phrase 'you could at it' (should be 'could be good at it'). Also article 'the' before 'young age' is unnecessary; use 'a young age'. Suggestion: use 'lies' to indicate where a talent is located and 'could be good at' to express potential ability.

× So I think trying different thing will help to identify

✓ So I think trying different things will help to identify them or help you discover them.

Errors: plural/number mismatch 'thing' should be 'things', and sentence is incomplete/fragmentary because the object of 'identify' is missing. Suggestion: make the noun plural and provide the object, e.g., 'identify them' or 'discover your talents', to complete the thought.