Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I take participate in new activities as a child and many times in India.

Giám khảo

Should people try as many different things as they can?

Thí sinh

Yes. Should people try as many different things every day, every time, every minute, every second?

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, use past tense for childhood, and provide 1–2 specific supporting details linked logically. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had many opportunities to try new activities as a child in India. For example, I joined a traditional dance class when I was eight and learned swimming at age ten. These experiences helped me become more confident and curious about learning new skills.

Should people try as many different things as they can?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and support it with reasons using linking words. Avoid rhetorical overstatement and ask-back phrasing. State your view, then give 1–2 concise reasons or an example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try a variety of things. Trying new activities broadens your skills and helps you discover interests; for instance, I experimented with painting and coding, which improved my creativity and problem-solving.

Ngữ pháp

Verb tense / sentence structure / word choice

× Yes, I take participate in new activities as a child and many times in India.

✓ Yes, I took part in many new activities when I was a child in India.

Issues: incorrect verb form and structure. 'take participate' is ungrammatical — correct collocation is 'take part' or 'participate in', and because the question asks about the past, the past tense 'took' (or 'participated') should be used. Also 'as a child' should be expressed as 'when I was a child' and 'many times in India' is more naturally 'many new activities when I was a child in India' or 'many times while I was in India'. Suggestion: use a single correct verb collocation (either 'took part in' or 'participated in') and match tense to the question.

Question formation / modal phrasing

× Yes. Should people try as many different things every day, every time, every minute, every second?

✓ Yes. People should try as many different things as they can, but not literally every minute or every second.

Issues: sentence is awkwardly formed as a question repeating 'Should' after the examiner's question and exaggerates frequency with 'every minute, every second', which is unnatural. The intended response is an affirmative statement using modal verb 'should' in a declarative form: 'People should...' Keep frequency expressions realistic. Suggestion: answer directly with a declarative statement and avoid redundant question format and hyperbolic time phrases.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Different— Dissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
New— Recently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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