Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Порада: Робіть відповіді більш граматично правильними, зв’язними та конкретними. Починайте з чіткої теми, використовуйте минулі часи для опису дитячого досвіду, додавайте 1–2 короткі деталі (де, коли, як часто) та пов’язуйте речення сполучниками. Також зверніть увагу на вимову і артиклі (наприклад, “skiing” як заняття).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. As a child I took lessons from a local instructor, and we often did skiing sessions during winter holidays. These lessons helped me become more confident on the slopes and made winter sports one of my favourite hobbies.

Gợi ý: Порада: Починайте з чіткої теми, використовуйте зв’язні слова (for example, moreover, therefore) і наводьте конкретні причини або приклади. Розбийте довге речення на 2–3 короткі, щоб відповідь була природною і легшою для розуміння. Зверніть увагу на артиклі та словоосідання (наприклад, say “help you at work” або “help in your work”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe people should try many different things. For example, taking up hobbies like coding or public speaking can improve useful work-related skills such as problem-solving and communication. Moreover, trying new activities helps you discover interests you might not have expected.

× Yes I did. For instance I take lessons from my teacher We had very interesting activities as skiing.

✓ Yes, I did. For instance, I took lessons from my teacher. We had very interesting activities, such as skiing.

The sentence contains incorrect verb tense: 'take' should be in the past tense 'took' to match 'Yes, I did' and 'We had'. Also punctuation and connector use are incorrect; a period is needed after 'teacher' and 'such as' should be used instead of 'as' to introduce an example. Suggestion: Use past tense for actions that occurred in the past and add appropriate punctuation to separate ideas. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× I think yes because your activities and your hobbies can also help you in the work and you can improve your skills through these activities

✓ I think so, because your activities and hobbies can also help you at work, and you can improve your skills through these activities.

The phrase 'I think yes' is unnatural; use 'I think so' for agreement. 'In the work' is incorrect preposition use; 'at work' is the idiomatic expression. This sentence otherwise uses modal 'can' correctly, but the present-tense framing and preposition need adjustment. Suggestion: Use 'I think so' and choose correct prepositions like 'at work' for idiomatic English. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)