Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
Thí sinh
Yeah, of course I have many opportunities to take part in new activities as a child just like I will take part in some activities for like running or playing some games or a piano or the other thing and they're so fun.
Giám khảo
Should people try as many different things as they can?
Thí sinh
Yeah, absolutely. People should try different things. They can see colour colour their life makes their life more funny and they have more try one chance to try different things and this is a wonderful chance to learn something or learn new knowledge.
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更加简洁、有条理,并使用正确的时态和更准确的词汇。你可以先用一句话直接回答考官的问题(说明是否有机会),然后补充一到两句具体的例子(使用过去时描述童年经历)并用连接词使表达连贯。注意避免重复词(如 "like" 多次出现)和语法错误(例如时态应为过去时)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had many opportunities to try new activities as a child. For example, I took piano lessons for three years and often joined running and team games at school. These experiences were fun and helped me discover new interests.
Should people try as many different things as they can?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要有更明确的观点并给出具体理由和例子,使用连词来组织句子。避免重复词和错误搭配(例如 "see colour colour"、"more funny")。使用更自然的表达来说明原因(例如 "broaden their horizons"、"gain new skills")。保持答案在三到五句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities because it broadens their horizons and helps them gain new skills. For instance, someone who tries cooking and painting may discover a hidden talent or a new hobby. Overall, trying different things makes life more interesting and rewarding.
× Yeah, of course I have many opportunities to take part in new activities as a child just like I will take part in some activities for like running or playing some games or a piano or the other thing and they're so fun.
✓ Yeah, of course I had many opportunities to take part in new activities as a child. For example, I took part in activities like running, playing games, and learning the piano, and they were so fun.
问题类型:现在时使用不当(应使用过去时)。原句中使用了现在时“have”与“will take part”,但句子描述的是过去作为儿童的经历,时态应为过去时。此外句子结构混乱,列举项目时应使用并列结构并保持时态一致。建议将动词改为过去式(have → had;will take part → took part;are → were),并用逗号或连词清晰列举。
× They can see colour colour their life makes their life more funny and they have more try one chance to try different things and this is a wonderful chance to learn something or learn new knowledge.
✓ They can see how different colours make their life more interesting, and they have more chances to try different things. This is a wonderful opportunity to learn new things or gain new knowledge.
问题类型:句子结构错误,原句语序混乱,重复用词("colour colour")、搭配不当("more funny"、"have more try one chance")以及词汇使用不准确。建议:1) 用介词短语或从句(how ...)引出原因;2) 用恰当形容词(interesting 替代 funny);3) 用复数名词表示多次机会(chances);4) 用 opportunity 或 chance 表示机会,避免冗余(learn new things / gain new knowledge)。