Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
Thí sinh
Do you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
Giám khảo
Should people try as many different things as they can?
Thí sinh
Should the people try as many different things as they can
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题,未作实质回答。按评分规则,应直接回应问题,给出主题句并补充具体细节(如你参加过哪些新活动、何时、频率、感受或结果),使用连接词使表达连贯,且不超过五句。请避免简单复述问题。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had quite a few opportunities to try new activities as a child. For example, I joined a local music class when I was eight and later tried painting at school workshops. These experiences helped me discover my interests and improve my confidence. Overall, I was encouraged by my parents and teachers to explore different hobbies.
Should people try as many different things as they can?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 你的回答仍然只是重复问题,未表达观点或提供理由。按评分规则,应先给出明确的立场句,然后用具体原因或例子支持观点,使用连接词(例如 because, for instance, moreover)使论述连贯,保持在五句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe people should try as many different things as possible because it broadens their perspectives and helps them discover new passions. For instance, experimenting with sports, arts, and languages can reveal hidden talents and improve problem-solving skills. However, it’s also important to focus on a few interests deeply to gain real expertise.
× Do you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
✓ Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
原句时态与上下文不一致。考官问的是过去(Did you...),学生却用了现在时(Do you...),这构成句子结构和时态使用错误。建议:根据提问的时态使用相同的时态回答;若谈论过去的经历,应使用过去式(Did you / I had / I didn't have)。
× Should the people try as many different things as they can
✓ Should people try as many different things as they can?
原句在定冠词和句尾标点上有问题。句子中不需要定冠词“the”来泛指人们(people),使用“the people”会改变含义并导致结构不自然;句末缺少问号。建议:泛指群体时使用复数名词直接用 people;提问句末需加问号。