Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, concise supporting details and correct grammar. Keep to at most 3–4 short sentences, avoid repetition, and add one or two specific details (e.g., dance styles, age, or a memorable event). Use linking words (for example, "for example" or "in addition") to connect ideas. Also correct tense and filler-word issues.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities as a child. For example, I joined different dance groups in high school and learned styles such as ballet and hip-hop. This helped me build confidence and meet new friends.

Gợi ý: State your opinion clearly in one sentence, then support it with one or two specific reasons and a brief example. Use linking words like "because" and "for example," but avoid redundancy (do not repeat phrases such as "different things" too often). Make sure sentence structure is grammatical and finish the thought.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try many different things because it helps them discover new interests and develop useful skills. For example, learning a musical instrument or volunteering can build patience and teamwork, which are helpful in both study and work.

× Yes, when I was a child, I had so many experiences like I was a dancer before.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had many experiences; for example, I was a dancer.

The original sentence used 'had so many experiences like I was a dancer before.' This is awkward rather than strictly ungrammatical. The issue is with past tense phrasing and sentence structure. 'Had many experiences' is more natural than 'had so many experiences like.' Replace 'like' with 'for example' and remove the redundant 'before' because 'when I was a child' already indicates past time. Suggestion: use clear connectors and avoid redundant time markers.

× I joined when I was When I was in high school, I joined different dance groups like different types of

✓ When I was in high school, I joined different dance groups that performed different styles.

The original sentence repeats 'When I was' and is incomplete ('like different types of' is unfinished). This is a sentence structure and cohesion problem. Remove the repetition, complete the idea by specifying what 'different types' refers to (styles), and maintain past tense consistency with 'joined' and 'performed.' Ensure sentences are complete and avoid duplication.

× Yes, I believe that people must try different things as they can because it is important for us to step out of our comfort zone in order for us to explore different things and to know more about what can we do and how

✓ Yes, I believe that people should try different things as much as they can because it is important to step out of our comfort zones to explore new things and learn what we can do and how.

Several issues: 'must' is very strong modal; 'should' is more natural for advice. 'As they can' is incorrect; use 'as much as they can.' 'In order for us to' is wordy; use 'to.' 'Comfort zone' should be pluralized to 'comfort zones' when speaking generally. The clause 'to know more about what can we do and how' has incorrect question word order; change to 'learn what we can do and how.' Maintain parallel structure and concise phrasing. Use appropriate modal ('should') for recommendation.