Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, fluency and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and word choice, avoid repetition, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words if adding more detail.

Ví dụ: Yes. When I was a child, my mother encouraged me to try new activities. For example, she enrolled me in piano lessons and sometimes signed me up for small piano competitions, which helped me build confidence and perform in front of others.

Gợi ý: Make the answer more organized and natural: give a clear opinion, a reason, and a specific example. Correct grammar (use singular/plural, articles) and avoid repetition. Use a linking word (for example, because, therefore) to connect your reason.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe people should try a variety of activities because it prevents life and work from becoming monotonous. For example, taking up a hobby like painting or a weekend language class can introduce new experiences and help you meet different people, which makes life more interesting.

× Yes when I was a children, my mom always enjoyed me to take part take part in some new activities like piano activities some piano competitions.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my mom always encouraged me to take part in new activities, such as piano lessons and piano competitions.

The original sentence has a singular/plural error ('a children' should be 'a child') and inappropriate verb choice ('enjoyed me to take part' is incorrect). According to the list, fix the singular/plural issue by using the singular noun 'child'. Also replace 'enjoyed me to take part' with the correct verb 'encouraged me to take part'. Remove duplicated phrase 'take part'. Use 'such as' to introduce examples and choose clear nouns: 'piano lessons' and 'piano competitions'. Ensure commas and articles are used properly.

× Yes, I think people should try some different things because our job and the life is so boring so if we have we we enjoy some new scenes we can and try some different scenes.

✓ Yes, I think people should try different things because our jobs and life can be boring, so if we experience new things, we can enjoy life more and try different activities.

The original contains tense and noun-number inconsistencies and awkward phrasing. Replace 'the life is so boring' with 'life can be boring' to express general present-tense truth (present tense issue). Change 'our job and the life' to 'our jobs and life' for correct noun agreement. Remove duplicated words ('we we') and unclear word 'scenes'; use 'experience new things' and 'activities' for clarity. Reorder clauses for natural English: cause then result. Use modal 'can' to indicate possibility.