Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 答えは自然で流暢ですが、さらに高得点を狙うためには具体性と結論を強め、文の結びを明確にしてください。また、関連語彙を増やして内容に深みを持たせ、接続詞を使って情報の流れをより論理的に整えましょう。例えば「どんなことを学んだか」「どのような成果があったか」を一つか二つ具体的に述べると良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was in high school, I became the leader of a film club that an older student had started, because he found it difficult to manage alone. I organized weekly meetings and delegated tasks like filming, editing, and event promotion, which improved my leadership and project-management skills. As a result, we held our first screening that attracted over 50 students, so it was a very rewarding experience.

Gợi ý: 意見は明確で適切ですが、より説得力を持たせるために理由を具体的に示し、接続語でまとまりを作ってください。また、例は具体性を高め、「自分の経験」や「一般的な事例」を一つ挙げると説得力が増します。語彙もやや平易なので、文脈に合った少し多様な語彙を加えましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Trying a variety of activities provides practical learning opportunities and helps people discover hidden talents. For instance, I once took a part-time job in customer service and learned communication and problem-solving skills that later helped me in group projects at university. Therefore, experimenting with different roles and hobbies can significantly broaden your perspective and career options.

× So I helped organize the club and coordinate the other student members.

✓ So I helped organize the club and coordinate the other student members.

The original sentence is actually grammatically acceptable; however, if aiming for naturalness, 'the other student members' could be simplified to 'the other members' because 'members' already implies students in this context. Article use is fine, but redundancy can be improved. Suggestion: say 'coordinate the other members' to avoid repetition.'},{