Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child
Giám khảo
Should people try as many different things as they can?
Thí sinh
Should people try as deep mindfulness as they can?
Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题,未作实际回答。根据评分规则,你需要直接回应问题并提供一到两句具体细节。回答应自然且不冗余,句子不超过五句。建议用主题句直接表明是否有机会,然后用连接词(例如:and, because, for example)补充具体例子或原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities as a child. For example, my parents enrolled me in swimming lessons and weekend art classes, which helped me develop confidence and new skills. These experiences encouraged me to be curious and try other hobbies later.
Should people try as many different things as they can?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 学生误解并重复或改写了问题(把“different things”错听为“deep mindfulness”),没有直接回答原问题。根据评分规则,应先明确表达观点,然后用连接词给出具体理由和例子。回答要简洁、自然,并使用与话题相关的词汇。
Ví dụ: I think people should try a variety of activities, but not everything at once. Trying different things helps you discover interests and strengths, and for example, sampling a few sports or hobbies can show which ones are worth pursuing further.
× Did you have any opportunities to take part in new activities as a child
✓ Yes, I did have opportunities to take part in new activities as a child.
学生的原句只是重复了考官的问题形式(疑问句),并且缺少陈述句回答所需的动词形式和主谓结构。根据题目要求,学生应给出肯定或否定的回答并补充细节。建议改为完整的陈述句(例如“Yes, I did have...”或“No, I didn’t have...”),并在后面加上具体例子或细节,确保主谓一致和时态与“as a child”对应为过去时。
× Should people try as deep mindfulness as they can?
✓ Yes, people should try to practice mindfulness as much as they can.
原句中“as deep mindfulness as they can”搭配不当。英语中常用表达是“practice mindfulness”或“be mindful”,以及“as much as they can”表示程度。原句结构混乱,应使用情态动词+动词不定式(should + do)或用陈述回答。建议改为“Yes, people should try to practice mindfulness as much as they can.”并根据需要补充原因或例子。