Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は内容が分かりやすく具体例も含まれていますが、文法と表現の自然さに改善の余地があります。まず、最初の文は短すぎて不自然なので、より自然な導入（例：Yes, I did.）を使いましょう。次に「did a leader of a filming club」は誤った語順と語法なので、“served as the leader”や“was the leader”などの表現に直してください。また、時制や冠詞（a filming club → the filming club または a film club）や代名詞（he → my senior）に注意し、文を2〜3文にまとめて簡潔に説明しましょう。接続詞（for example, so, because）を適切に使い、流れを滑らかにすることも重要です。具体的な修正ポイント：1) 自然な導入表現、2) 正しい語順と動詞句（serve/lead/manage）、3) 冠詞と名詞の修正、4) 時制の一貫性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. In high school I served as the leader of the film club that my senior had started, because he couldn't manage it alone. As the leader, I organized meetings, delegated tasks to members, and coordinated our filming schedule to keep projects on track.

Gợi ý: 内容は明確で理にかなっていますが、文法と語彙の正確さ、結びの文の完結性を改善してください。注意点：複数形・単数形の一致（new experience → new experiences）、動詞の活用（provide → provides）、スペルミス（borden → broaden）を修正する必要があります。また、理由を述べた後に具体例で補強していますが、接続詞（For example, Additionally）を使って文のつながりをより明確にしましょう。最後に文を1〜2文にまとめ、過度に長くならないようにします。具体的な修正ポイント：1) 主語と動詞の一致、2) 複数形の使用、3) スペルと語彙の正確さ、4) 接続詞で論理的に結ぶ。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think so. New experiences provide valuable learning opportunities and help people develop practical skills. For example, trying different jobs or hobbies can broaden your perspective and teach you new ways of solving problems.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The student used 'had' which is a past-tense main verb meaning 'possess' and is incorrect here. The examiner asked 'Did you have any opportunities...?' which uses the auxiliary 'did' so the correct short response is 'Yes, I did.' Suggestion: respond to questions formed with 'did' using 'did' for affirmative short answers (e.g., 'Yes, I did.').

× When I was a high school student, I did a leader of a filming club.

✓ When I was a high school student, I was the leader of a filming club.

The phrase 'did a leader' is ungrammatical in English. To state a role held in the past, use 'was' + noun (be verb) or 'served as' + noun. Suggestion: use 'I was the leader' or 'I served as the leader' to describe a past role.

× That club was made by my senior, but he couldn't run it by himself.

✓ That club was started by my senior, but he couldn't run it by himself.

'Made by my senior' is a literal translation; 'started' or 'founded' is more natural for creating a club. Pronoun 'my senior' is acceptable, but verb choice was incorrect. Suggestion: use 'started' or 'founded' when referring to creating clubs or organizations.

× So I helped him to manage club members as a leader.

✓ So I helped him manage the club members as the leader.

The infinitive 'to manage' is acceptable but 'helped him manage' (without 'to') is more natural. Also 'club members' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' and the role should be 'the leader' rather than 'a leader' because it refers to a specific position. Suggestion: use 'helped him manage the club members as the leader.'

× Yes, I think so because new experience provide us some valuable learning opportunities and help us develop new skills.

✓ Yes, I think so because new experiences provide us with some valuable learning opportunities and help us develop new skills.

Subject 'new experience' should be plural 'new experiences' to agree with plural verbs. 'Provide' and 'help' are correct plural verb forms but need plural subject. Also add preposition 'with' after 'provide'. Suggestion: use plural nouns to match the plural verb and include 'with' after 'provide' when indicating recipients.

× For example, trying new and unfamiliar jobs or hobbies can borden your perspective

✓ For example, trying new and unfamiliar jobs or hobbies can broaden your perspective.

The student misspelled 'broaden' as 'borden' and used 'your' correctly. 'Broaden' is the correct verb meaning 'to widen'. Suggestion: check spelling of common verbs like 'broaden' and end the sentence with a period.