Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Сосредоточьтесь на ясной структуре ответа: начните с короткого утверждения, затем приведите 1–2 конкретных подробностей и завершите выводом. Устраните грамматические ошибки (например, «I took part», «I spent my time there», «it gave me a lot») и повторения («every week, every day» — используйте одно выражение). Используйте связки (for example, because, which helped me) для логичности. Увеличьте словарный запас, употребляя слова как "membership", "training sessions", "skills".

Ví dụ: Yes. I joined a local swimming club when I was a child. I attended weekly training sessions and often spent whole weekends practicing, which improved my technique and fitness. Because of that experience I became a confident swimmer and still enjoy swimming today.

Gợi ý: Дайте прямо сформулированный ответ, затем подкрепите его 1–2 конкретными причинами с корректной грамматикой и связками (for example, because, such as). Избегайте неопределённых фраз («maybe it will affect on them» — правильно: «it may affect them»). Приводите конкретные последствия (карьера, личное развитие). Используйте более подходящую лексику: "opportunities", "skills", "career prospects", "personal growth".

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try new things. Trying different activities opens up opportunities and helps you develop useful skills, such as teamwork or problem-solving. For example, learning a new language could improve your career prospects and boost your confidence.

× When I was a child I had a great opportunity to T took part in swimming club.

✓ When I was a child I had a great opportunity to take part in a swimming club.

The original sentence mixes infinitive and past tense ('to T took') which is incorrect. Use the infinitive 'to take' after 'opportunity to'. Also add the article 'a' before 'swimming club' for correctness. Suggestion: use 'had an opportunity to take part' or 'had the opportunity to take part'.

× It was a great time because I spent there for the whole day, every week, every day and I can swim now.

✓ It was a great time because I spent the whole day there, every week, and I can swim now.

The order 'spent there for the whole day' is awkward; place the object/time expressions after 'spent' as 'spent the whole day there'. Also 'every week, every day' is redundant; likely 'every week' is intended. Ensure parallel structure and remove repetition.

× It gives me a lot and that's all.

✓ It taught me a lot, and that's all.

The phrase 'It gives me a lot' mixes present tense with a past event; because the student speaks about a past activity, use past tense 'taught me a lot'. 'That's all' is acceptable as a concluding remark.

× If people have opportunity to try something new, they definitely need to try it because it gives you new possibilities, maybe it gives you an experience and maybe it will affect on them in future.

✓ If people have the opportunity to try something new, they should definitely try it because it gives them new possibilities; it may give them experience and may affect them in the future.

Missing article 'the' before 'opportunity' is corrected. 'Need to' is strong; 'should' is more natural for advice. Pronoun inconsistency: changed 'you' to 'them' to match 'people'. 'Maybe it gives you an experience' is awkward; use 'may give them experience'. 'Affect on them' is incorrect collocation; use 'affect them'. Add 'in the future' for time expression.

× They can use it for their jobs or to educate.

✓ They can use it for their jobs or for their education.

The phrase 'to educate' is incorrect here; 'education' (noun) or 'to educate themselves' would be needed. 'Use it for their jobs or for their education' is parallel and grammatically correct. Added 'for' to maintain parallel structure.