Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct common errors (use of articles, countable/uncountable nouns, and verb forms) and avoid redundancy. Keep answer within 3–4 sentences. For example: say where you lived, explain limited opportunities, mention one specific activity you joined and why parental support was lacking.

Ví dụ: I didn’t have many opportunities to try new activities as a child because I grew up in a small rural town where schools offered few extracurriculars. However, I sometimes joined the school football team when it was available, although my parents were reluctant to let me take part because they worried about costs and my safety. Overall, opportunities were limited but I enjoyed the occasions I could join.

Gợi ý: Make the response more concise and structured: state your position, give 1–2 clear reasons with linking words, and add a brief example. Fix grammar (pronouns, word order, and idioms) and avoid repetitions like “in life.” Use varied vocabulary (e.g., discover, develop, broaden). Keep to 2–3 sentences for effectiveness.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think people should try many different things because it helps them discover their interests and develop new skills. For example, someone unsure about their career might try volunteering or short courses to test different fields and find what suits them best.

× 'When I was a child, there were no lot of opportunities given to me because I lived in a province and at that time there were no so much activities in school, but sometimes I joined with sports, but my parents wouldn't support me to do so or to join'

✓ 'When I was a child, there were not a lot of opportunities given to me because I lived in a province and at that time there were not so many activities in school, but sometimes I joined in sports, although my parents wouldn't support me to do so or to join.'

'Errors: "no lot of" is incorrect for countable plural; use "not a lot of". "no so much activities" mixes negation and quantifier incorrectly and uses "much" with countable noun; use "not so many activities" or "not many activities". Also "joined with sports" is incorrect collocation; use "joined in sports" or "took part in sports". Suggestions: use correct plural quantifiers (many/much, a lot of), place negation with auxiliary (were not), and use correct verb + preposition collocations.'

× 'I encourage them to do so because it will help them to explore themselves and to know their self better.'

✓ 'I encourage them to do so because it will help them to explore themselves and to know themselves better.'

'Errors: "know their self" is incorrect; reflexive/reflexive-like pronoun for third person plural should be "themselves". This involves verb + -ing context of reflexive use and pronoun form. Suggestion: use the correct reflexive pronoun "themselves" when referring back to "them".'

× 'And for example, they want like they are still not figure out what they want in life, then joining new activities in life will make them help.'

✓ 'For example, if they still have not figured out what they want in life, then joining new activities will help them.'

'Errors: sentence has several structure problems: incorrect use of "want like", missing auxiliary "have" for present perfect "have not figured out", wrong verb form "figure" instead of past participle "figured", and unnatural phrasing "will make them help". Suggestions: use conditional "if", use present perfect "have not figured out" to indicate an ongoing state, and use "will help them" for correct object placement.'