Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần chỉnh ngữ pháp, phát âm và ý rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lỗi động từ (ví dụ “had attend” không đúng), dùng thì phù hợp và câu chủ đề rõ ràng. Giữ độ dài câu dưới 5 câu, nối ý bằng liên từ (because, so, which) và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động (ví dụ loại nhạc, tần suất, cảm xúc cụ thể). Ví dụ: nêu thời gian, mô tả ngắn về lớp học, và kết quả bạn đạt được (tự tin hơn, kỹ năng nào tiến bộ).

Ví dụ: Yes. I took singing and music classes when I was a child, which I attended twice a week for two years. They were enjoyable because my teacher encouraged me and I practised performing in front of others. As a result, I became more confident and improved my rhythm and pitch. I would like to join similar classes again to further develop my singing technique.

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời rõ ràng và hệ thống: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, giải thích lý do với từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ “gain experience” thay vì “gain Canales”), và dùng linking words (for example, because, therefore). Tránh tiếng “umm” và lặp từ. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể ngắn gọn để minh hoạ (ví dụ học nghề mới giúp tăng kỹ năng giải quyết vấn đề).

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe people should try many different things because it helps them gain experience and develop new skills. For example, learning a new hobby like cooking can improve creativity and problem-solving. Therefore, exploring different activities makes people more adaptable and confident in unfamiliar situations.

× Yes, I had attend ballads and music classes when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I attended ballet and music classes when I was a child.

The original uses 'had attend' which combines past perfect auxiliary 'had' with base verb 'attend' incorrectly. The simple past 'attended' is appropriate for a completed action at a specific time in the past. Also 'ballads' is likely a word choice error; 'ballet' fits 'classes'. Suggestion: use simple past 'attended' for past events and choose the correct noun 'ballet'.

× They were really fun and they make me feel more confident and I really want to become more confident so I'd like to change them again.

✓ They were really fun and they made me feel more confident, and I wanted to become more confident so I would like to do them again.

Mixed tenses and agreement errors: 'They were' is past, but 'they make' is present — use past 'they made' for consistency. 'I really want to become' should match past perspective 'I wanted' when referring to childhood motivation. 'I'd like to change them again' is unclear; 'do them again' or 'take them again' fits. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (past) when talking about childhood and use appropriate verbs ('made', 'wanted', 'do/take').

× Yes, I think so, because people have many things that we don't know umm so I think people should explore many things to gain Canales and development skill and and this this help.

✓ Yes, I think so, because there are many things people do not know, so I think people should explore different activities to gain experience and develop skills, and this helps.

Multiple issues: use of 'people have many things that we don't know' is ungrammatical—'there are many things people do not know' (There be issue and clarity). 'Canales' seems incorrect; likely intended 'experience' or 'knowledge'. 'development skill' should be 'develop skills' (noun/verb form). Also 'this this help' has repetition and wrong verb form — use 'this helps'. Suggestion: use 'there are' to introduce existence, choose correct nouns ('experience'), pluralize 'skills', and ensure subject-verb agreement ('this helps').