Opportunities— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitations and fillers (uh, umm), make the sentence structure more concise, and give one specific example with a short detail to enrich content. Keep answers natural and within 3–4 sentences. Use linking words like “for example” or “such as” correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had many opportunities because my parents encouraged me to try different activities. For example, I took piano lessons for three years and played on the school soccer team, which helped me build confidence and teamwork skills.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and filler words, state your opinion clearly, then give two concise reasons linked with connectors (for example, because / which). Provide a short specific example or result to make the response more convincing.

Ví dụ: Definitely. People should try new things because it broadens their skills and helps them discover interests. For example, learning a hobby like painting can reduce stress and increase motivation, leading to better overall wellbeing.

× Yes, I had a plenty of uh, chances to take part in different activities as a child, umm, because my parents encouraged me to uh, take part umm, in different uh activities.

✓ Yes, I had plenty of chances to take part in different activities as a child because my parents encouraged me to take part in various activities.

The phrase 'a plenty of' is ungrammatical; use 'plenty of' without 'a' (Article errors, ID 22). Also 'different' repeated is stylistically weak; 'various' improves clarity. Remove filler words and unnecessary commas. Suggestion: use 'plenty of' + plural noun and avoid redundant repetition.

× Definitely, uh, people should try to uh, experience new things, uh, instead of, uh, staying at home and watching TV, umm, it's uh, also helps to reduce stress, umm, and get motivated.

✓ Definitely, people should try to experience new things instead of staying at home and watching TV; it also helps to reduce stress and increase motivation.

The original contains a subject-verb agreement and sentence structure problem: 'it's also helps' combines a subject contraction 'it is' with a verb 'helps', which is incorrect (Subject-verb agreement errors, ID 27 and Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Use either 'it helps' or 'it's helpful' — here 'it also helps' is correct. Also 'and get motivated' lacks a clear subject; change to 'and increase motivation' or 'and become motivated' to match structure. Remove filler words and join clauses with appropriate punctuation.