Tiredness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give one clear reason or example. Correct the unclear phrases and use natural expressions such as “take a nap,” “wash my face,” and “get my energy back.” Avoid adding details that do not make sense.

Ví dụ: I don’t often feel tired. If I do, I usually take a short nap or wash my face to feel refreshed. That normally helps me get my energy back.

Gợi ý: Use the present tense for a general habit, and describe the situation clearly. Replace unclear wording with a specific phrase such as “after a long, busy day at work.” Link the reason and example logically, and avoid contradictory time references.

Ví dụ: I usually feel tired after a long, busy day at work, especially when I have several technical tasks to finish. In the evening, I sometimes play cricket to relax and take my mind off work.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer and use natural collocations such as “wash my face,” “take a shower,” and “make a cup of coffee.” Keep the tense consistent: use the present tense to describe what you usually do. Finish your answer clearly instead of trailing off.

Ví dụ: When I feel tired, I usually take a shower or wash my face. After that, I make a cup of coffee, which helps me feel more alert and energetic.

Gợi ý: Give a clear yes-or-no answer, then explain why. Use natural phrases such as “go out with my friends” and “spend time together,” and correct the conditional wording to “if one of them calls me.” Keep the tense consistent and avoid repeating “definitely” and “of course.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually still go out if one of my friends invites me. Spending time with them and chatting helps me forget how tired I am. I often feel more refreshed afterwards.

× Moreover, I would say that I refresh myself with a ferrus face for at least so I can get the energy back to mine.

✓ Moreover, I would say that I refresh myself with a ferrus face so I can get the energy back to mine.

For at least needs to be followed by a duration or quantity, such as for at least ten minutes. Since no duration is given, remove this incomplete phrase.

× Moreover, I would say that I refresh myself with a ferrus face for at least so I can get the energy back to mine.

✓ Moreover, I would say that I refresh myself with a ferrus face for at least ten minutes so I can get my energy back.

Mine is a possessive pronoun used without a noun. Before the noun energy, use the possessive determiner my. The phrase for at least ten minutes is included here to show how for at least can be completed; use the actual duration you mean.

× This is the main reason I think because after I had technical job.

✓ I think this is the main reason: after I had a technical job, I usually felt tired.

Technical job is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before it.

× I usually felt tired.

✓ I usually feel tired.

The answer describes a regular or typical experience, so use the present simple feel rather than the past form felt.

× In the morning evening I get rid of tired by playing cricket.

✓ In the morning or evening, I get rid of tiredness by playing cricket.

Use or to connect the two alternatives, morning and evening. Without a conjunction, the time phrase is unclear.

× In the morning evening I get rid of tired by playing cricket.

✓ In the morning or evening, I get rid of tiredness by playing cricket.

Tired is an adjective, but the object of get rid of needs to be a noun. Use tiredness.

× Actually I feel tired means I just go for a fresh up with my face or get rid of a shower as soon as possible

✓ Actually, when I feel tired, I just go for a fresh up with my face or get rid of a shower as soon as possible.

The original uses means to join two clauses, but the intended meaning is a time condition. Use when to introduce the situation in which the action happens.

× Once I finished shower, I felt energetic

✓ Once I finish showering, I feel energetic.

After finish, use a gerund when referring to an activity: finish showering. The present tense also fits a general routine.

× Once I finished shower, I felt energetic

✓ Once I finish showering, I feel energetic.

The student is describing what generally happens, so use the present simple finish and feel rather than the past forms finished and felt.

× I had a cup of coffee I make and drink.

✓ I have a cup of coffee that I make and drink.

The original places two clauses next to each other without a relative pronoun. Add that to introduce the clause describing the coffee. Use have to describe a regular action.

× Yes, of course definitely I go with my friends outside if they anyone call me

✓ Yes, of course. I definitely go outside with my friends if anyone calls me.

Outside should be placed after the verb phrase go and before with my friends in this sentence. This order makes the intended meaning clear.

× Yes, of course definitely I go with my friends outside if they anyone call me

✓ Yes, of course. I definitely go outside with my friends if any of them calls me.

They anyone combines two incompatible subject forms. Use any of them to refer to one or more people in the group.

× Yes, of course definitely I go with my friends outside if they anyone call me

✓ Yes, of course. I definitely go outside with my friends if anyone calls me.

Anyone is grammatically singular, so the present-simple verb needs the -s ending: calls.

× Because meeting up friends together spending time, always feel refreshed after talks.

✓ Because meeting up with friends and spending time together always make me feel refreshed after talking.

The phrasal verb meet up is followed by with when naming the people someone meets. Use meet up with friends.

× Because meeting up friends together spending time, always feel refreshed after talks.

✓ Because meeting up with friends and spending time together always make me feel refreshed after talking.

After the preposition after, use the -ing form of a verb when describing an activity. Talking is appropriate here.

× Because meeting up friends together spending time, always feel refreshed after talks.

✓ Meeting up with friends and spending time together always make me feel refreshed after talking.

The original is an incomplete clause beginning with because and does not identify who feels refreshed. The corrected version forms a complete sentence with a subject and a main verb.

× I felt very energetic with them.

✓ I feel very energetic with them.

This describes a general feeling when spending time with friends, so use the present simple feel rather than the past form felt.