Tiredness— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often feel tired?

Thí sinh

Yes, I often feel tired because I have a very busy schedule under too many things to do.

Giám khảo

When would you feel tired?

Thí sinh

When I do much sports or study for a long time

Giám khảo

What do you do when you feel tired?

Thí sinh

When I feel tired I usually go to sleep for a short time because it helps me relax

Giám khảo

When you feel tired, do you still go out with your friends?

Thí sinh

No, when I'm tired, I don't usually go out with my friends because I need to recover my energy.

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Part 1

Do you often feel tired?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,原因也比较清楚,但“under too many things to do”用法不自然,应改为“have too many things to do”或“have a busy schedule”。可以加入具体活动,使答案更有内容;同时注意不要重复表达“忙碌”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often feel tired because I have a busy schedule and too many assignments to finish. For example, I usually have classes during the day and spend several hours studying in the evening.

When would you feel tired?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 答案缺少完整句子,且“do much sports”不自然,应该说“do a lot of exercise”或“play sports for a long time”。建议先直接回答时间或情况,再补充一个具体原因,并使用“especially”或“when”连接信息。

Ví dụ: I usually feel tired after doing a lot of exercise or studying for several hours. I feel especially exhausted when I have to concentrate on a difficult subject for a long time.

What do you do when you feel tired?

Điểm: 82.0

Gợi ý: 回答结构清楚,行动和原因都有,内容符合问题。为了更自然,可以把“go to sleep for a short time”改为“take a short nap”,并在从句前加逗号;还可以说明小睡的具体时长或效果,使细节更丰富。

Ví dụ: When I feel tired, I usually take a short nap of about twenty minutes because it helps me relax and regain my energy. If I cannot sleep, I listen to some quiet music instead.

When you feel tired, do you still go out with your friends?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,理由合理,整体表达自然。可以将“recover my energy”改为更常见的“recharge my batteries”或“rest and regain my energy”。建议增加一个具体结果,例如第二天状态更好,但控制在两到三句话内。

Ví dụ: No, I usually stay at home when I feel tired because I need to rest and recharge my batteries. After a good night’s sleep, I normally feel refreshed and can enjoy spending time with my friends.

Ngữ pháp

14 - Incorrect use of quantifiers(量词使用错误)

× When I do much sports or study for a long time

✓ When I do a lot of sports or study for a long time

“Sports”通常是不可数名词,不能用“much”来修饰表示日常活动的数量。肯定句中更自然的表达是“a lot of sports”。也可以说“play a lot of sports”。

11 - Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× Yes, I often feel tired because I have a very busy schedule under too many things to do.

✓ Yes, I often feel tired because I have a very busy schedule with too many things to do.

“Under too many things to do”中的介词“under”使用不正确。这里表示“有很多事情要做”,应使用“with”。建议记住固定搭配“a schedule with many things to do”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Busy— Occupied; Unavailable; Hectic
Long— Lengthy; Soon; Yearn for
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Short— Concise; Brief; Scarce; Briefly
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