Tiredness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and avoid repeating “I feel.” Complete the final idea instead of ending with “commute for.” Use a natural expression such as “commute to work” and connect your reason clearly. You could also mention the length of your commute to make your answer more specific.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often feel tired, especially on weekdays. I work from 8 a.m. to 5 p.m., and my commute takes about an hour each way. By the end of the day, I usually feel exhausted.

Gợi ý: Give a clear time or situation in the topic sentence, such as “I usually feel tired when I get home from work.” Correct the grammar in “long commute make” by saying “a long commute makes.” Avoid repeating “tired” and “weak”; use a more precise word such as “drained” or “exhausted.”

Ví dụ: I usually feel tired when I get home from work. A long commute makes me feel drained, especially when I have to stand on a crowded bus. As a result, I need a little time to relax before doing anything else.

Gợi ý: Use parallel grammar after “I”: say “sit,” “take,” and “drink,” rather than “sitting,” “taking,” and “drink.” “Refresh my throat” is not the most natural explanation; say “stay hydrated” or “feel refreshed.” Organize the answer with a clear sequence and remove fillers such as “uh.”

Ví dụ: When I feel tired, I usually sit on the sofa and take a few deep breaths. I also drink a couple of glasses of water to stay hydrated. After that, I normally rest for about half an hour before starting my evening activities.

Gợi ý: Answer consistently in the present tense because the question asks about your usual behavior: use “I don’t go out” rather than “I will not go” or “I was tired.” Avoid repeating “for myself,” and finish your sentence clearly. Explain why you prefer staying home and add one specific activity you do alone.

Ví dụ: No, I usually don’t go out with my friends when I feel tired. I prefer to stay at home and spend some quiet time by myself because I need to recharge. I might watch a TV show or go to bed early instead.

× Yes I feel I feel tired especially during the weekdays because I need to go to work every day from 8:00 to 5:00 PM and usually I do commute for.

✓ Yes, I feel tired, especially during the weekdays, because I need to go to work every day from 8:00 AM to 5:00 PM, and I usually commute for a long time.

The repeated phrase I feel is unnecessary. The phrase do commute for is incomplete and uses the wrong structure. Use usually commute for a long time to express the duration of the commute. The preposition for is correctly followed by a duration, such as a long time.

× I feel tired when I just arrive at home every day because long commute make your body feel very weak and tired.

✓ I feel tired when I arrive home every day because a long commute makes me feel very weak and tired.

Use arrive home without the preposition at when describing arrival at one's home. The singular noun phrase long commute needs the article a. Because commute is singular, the verb must be makes, not make. The phrase makes me feel is more grammatically appropriate than makes your body feel because the speaker is describing their own experience.

× Usually I just uh, sit on my sofa and taking a deep breath and uh, just drink a couple glasses of mineral water to refresh my throat because I will feel very exhausted.

✓ Usually, I just sit on my sofa, take a deep breath, and drink a couple of glasses of mineral water to refresh my throat because I feel very exhausted.

The verbs after sit on my sofa should have the same form: sit, take, and drink. Therefore, taking must be changed to take. The expression a couple of is normally followed by of before a plural noun, so use a couple of glasses. Because this sentence describes a usual situation, use the present tense feel instead of the future form will feel.

× I will not go with my friends when I was tired or when I feel tired because I just stayed alone for myself. Spend time alone for myself and. 30.

✓ I do not go out with my friends when I feel tired because I prefer to stay by myself and spend time alone.

The question asks about a usual habit, so use the present tense do not go and feel, not the future form will not go or the past form was. Similarly, stayed must be changed to stay. The phrase by myself is the correct expression for being alone; for myself is not appropriate here. Spend time alone for myself is a sentence fragment, so it should be connected to the main sentence as and spend time alone.