Tiredness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then add one clear reason and one activity. Use natural collocations such as “do the grocery shopping” and “unwind by listening to music.” Avoid the incorrect structure “I usually do enjoy like”; use “I usually enjoy” or “I usually relax by.” Add a comma before “which” and say “in the evening” rather than “for the evening.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I often feel tired when I get home from work, especially after doing the grocery shopping and other household chores. To unwind, I usually listen to music or go for a short walk, which helps me relax and feel more energetic in the evening.

Gợi ý: The answer is relevant and includes a useful contrast between weekdays and weekends, but the second sentence is grammatically difficult to follow. Use “a twelve-hour shift,” add punctuation around “however,” and make the weekend clause complete with a subject and verb. Use linking words such as “However” to organize the contrast clearly.

Ví dụ: I usually feel tired after work because I work a twelve-hour shift. It leaves me completely exhausted on weekdays. However, I feel more energetic at weekends because spending time with my family and going out with friends helps me recharge.

Gợi ý: You give several specific activities, but the final phrase “This improved” is incomplete and should be removed or completed. Say “especially jazz” rather than “mostly jazz,” and use “change of scenery,” not “change of scenario.” Add linking words and punctuation so that the three activities do not run together.

Ví dụ: When I’m tired, I usually listen to music, especially jazz, because its relaxed rhythm helps me unwind. If I need a change of scenery, I go for a short walk, which clears my mind. At weekends, I also enjoy watching films with my family because it helps me recharge.

Gợi ý: The answer is direct and well supported by an example. Correct the subject–verb agreement in “their company cheers me up and helps me,” replace the unnatural word “dietiness” with “tiredness” or “exhaustion,” and use “reduces” because “a short coffee break or a walk” is treated as one option. “A coffee break” is more natural than “short coffee break” in this context.

Ví dụ: Yes, even when I’m exhausted, I still go out with my friends because their company cheers me up and helps me forget my tiredness. For example, having a coffee or going for a short walk together reduces my stress and lifts my mood.

× Yes, I often feel tired when I get home from work, especially after doing grocery and other household chores.

✓ Yes, I often feel tired when I get home from work, especially after grocery shopping and doing other household chores.

Grocery is not normally used by itself as the object of doing in this expression. Use grocery shopping or groceries instead.

× To unwind myself I usually do enjoy like listening to music or going for a short walk which helps me feel more energetic for the evening.

✓ To unwind, I usually enjoy listening to music or going for a short walk, which helps me feel more energetic in the evening.

The structure do enjoy like listening is incorrect. Enjoy should be followed directly by a gerund, such as listening. A comma also helps separate the introductory phrase and the nonessential relative clause.

× I work twelve hours shift which leaves me completely exhausted on weekdays on weekends however spending time with my family and going out with friends, helping me recharge, and feel much more energetic and enthusiastic.

✓ I work a twelve-hour shift, which leaves me completely exhausted on weekdays. On weekends, however, spending time with my family and going out with friends helps me recharge and feel much more energetic and enthusiastic.

A singular countable noun such as shift needs an article, so use a shift. When a number and a noun form a compound adjective before another noun, use the singular form twelve-hour.

× I work twelve hours shift which leaves me completely exhausted on weekdays on weekends however spending time with my family and going out with friends, helping me recharge, and feel much more energetic and enthusiastic.

✓ I work a twelve-hour shift, which leaves me completely exhausted on weekdays. On weekends, however, spending time with my family and going out with friends helps me recharge and feel much more energetic and enthusiastic.

The original sentence combines weekday and weekend ideas without suitable punctuation or a clear sentence boundary. Separating the ideas into two sentences makes the structure clear. The phrase helping me recharge is also incorrectly attached; use helps me recharge because it is the main verb of the weekend subject.

× I work twelve hours shift which leaves me completely exhausted on weekdays on weekends however spending time with my family and going out with friends, helping me recharge, and feel much more energetic and enthusiastic.

✓ I work a twelve-hour shift, which leaves me completely exhausted on weekdays. On weekends, however, spending time with my family and going out with friends helps me recharge and feel much more energetic and enthusiastic.

The subject spending time with my family and going out with friends is treated as one combined activity, so use the singular verb helps rather than helping or help.

× This improved

✓ This helps me recharge.

This improved is an incomplete and unclear ending in this context. The response describes a regular routine, so complete the idea with This helps me recharge.

× Even when I am exhausted, I still go out with my friends because their company cheer me up and help me forget my dietiness.

✓ Even when I am exhausted, I still go out with my friends because their company cheers me up and helps me forget my dietiness.

Company is a singular, uncountable noun. Therefore, the present-tense verbs need the third-person singular ending: cheers and helps.

× For example, a short coffee break or a walk together always reduce my stress and lift my mood.

✓ For example, a short coffee break or a walk together always reduces my stress and lifts my mood.

The subject presents two singular alternatives connected by or, so the verb agrees with the singular subject. Use reduces and lifts instead of reduce and lift.