Tiredness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly, then support your answer with a clear reason and example. Replace “sportive person” with “active person” or “sporty person,” and avoid the unnatural phrase “go to play.” Use “play golf or tennis” instead. Also, connect the final ideas with a linking word such as “so” rather than joining two complete sentences with a comma.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t often feel tired because I’m quite an active person. I only work in the mornings, so I usually play golf or tennis in the afternoons. Staying active helps me maintain my energy throughout the day.

Gợi ý: The answer is relevant and includes two specific situations, but “I lose my concentration on things” would sound more natural as “I find it difficult to concentrate.” Clarify what you drink, such as water or a sports drink, and use a linking word to connect the examples. “After playing eighteen holes” is accurate and suitably specific.

Ví dụ: I usually feel tired when I haven’t slept well because I find it difficult to concentrate the next day. I also feel worn out after playing eighteen holes of golf, especially in hot weather. In that situation, I like to sit down, drink some water, and rest for a while.

Gợi ý: The main ideas are understandable, but several phrases are unclear or grammatically inaccurate. Say “sit on the sofa” rather than “sit down on the sofa,” and replace “clear my sore to stretch my body” with “relax and stretch my body.” Avoid repetition in “take a take a walk,” and say “go for a walk” or “do some light exercise.” Explain that you choose gentle exercise when you are not completely exhausted.

Ví dụ: When I feel tired, I usually sit on the sofa or lie down for a few minutes to relax and stretch my body. If I’m not too exhausted, I go for a gentle walk because light exercise helps me feel refreshed. After that, I normally drink some water and take a short rest.

Gợi ý: Give a clearer direct answer because the question asks whether you still go out with friends. The response is logical if you mean that light exercise helps you recover, but playing golf or tennis may sound demanding when you are tired. Use “exercise” as an uncountable noun, and replace “go to play” with “play” or “go and play.” Explain that you choose easy activities or shorten the outing when you feel very tired.

Ví dụ: Yes, but it depends on how tired I am. If I’m only a little tired, I may invite my friends to play golf or go for a walk because light exercise helps me feel more energetic. However, if I’m exhausted, I prefer to stay home and get some rest.

× I'm a sportive person.

✓ I'm a sporty person.

Sportive is grammatically possible but is not the natural adjective for describing someone who enjoys or regularly does sports. Use sporty in this context.

× In the afternoon, I usually go to play golf or play tennis, I keep moving to make myself energetic.

✓ In the afternoon, I usually play golf or tennis. I keep moving to stay energetic.

The original sentence joins two independent clauses with only a comma, creating a comma splice. Separate the ideas with a period or join them with a suitable conjunction. Also, stay energetic is more natural than make myself energetic in this context.

× When I feel tired, I would like to sit down on the sofa or lie in bed for a few minutes just to clear my sore to stretch my body.

✓ When I feel tired, I would like to sit on the sofa or lie in bed for a few minutes to relieve my soreness and stretch my body.

Sore is an adjective and cannot be used as the noun in clear my sore. Use the noun soreness instead. Relieve my soreness is also the natural expression for reducing physical discomfort.

× Sometimes I also go out to play golf, take a take a walk since light exercise.

✓ Sometimes I also go out to play golf or take a walk for some light exercise.

The conjunction or is needed to connect the two alternatives: play golf or take a walk. The phrase take a take a walk contains an unnecessary repetition. Use for some light exercise to express the purpose of taking a walk.