Tiredness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and use natural, accurate expressions. “Have enough fatigue disorder” is incorrect; say “I have a condition that causes fatigue” if this is medically accurate. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition such as “feel tired” and “throughout the day from morning to night.” A concise answer with one clear reason would be more effective.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often feel tired because I have a condition that causes fatigue. I usually feel exhausted from morning until evening, even when I get enough sleep.

Gợi ý: The answer is difficult to understand because of inaccurate word choices and sentence fragments. Use “times,” not “tires,” and “lunchtime,” not “launch time.” Begin with a complete topic sentence, then mention the main times when you feel tired. Avoid repeating the same idea and correct the repeated phrase “to be honest.”

Ví dụ: I usually feel tired in the afternoon, especially after lunch. I can also feel sleepy in the evening if I have had a busy day.

Gợi ý: The main idea is clear, but “coffee capsules” is not the natural expression unless you mean pods. Say “cups of coffee” or “coffee pods,” depending on your meaning. Avoid the unclear final sentence and provide one specific result or alternative action to make the answer more developed and coherent.

Ví dụ: I usually drink coffee when I feel tired. I have one cup in the morning and another in the afternoon, although I try not to drink too much because it can affect my sleep.

Gợi ý: The answer gives a clear “yes,” but several expressions are incorrect or unnatural. Use “spend time with my friends” instead of “satisfy with my friends,” and “I am loyal to my friends” instead of “I vow royalty to my friends.” Avoid mentioning “male or female” because it is unnecessary here; explain briefly why you still go out and how you manage your tiredness.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually still go out with my friends because I do not want to let them down. However, I may suggest a quiet activity, such as having dinner together, rather than going somewhere crowded.

× I always feel tired, in fact I just have enough fatigue disorder which makes me feel tired throughout the day without any exceptions from morning to night.

✓ I always feel tired. In fact, I have a fatigue disorder that makes me feel tired throughout the day, without any exceptions, from morning to night.

The singular countable noun disorder needs the indefinite article a. The original phrase enough fatigue disorder is not grammatically appropriate in this context. The sentence is also divided into two sentences to avoid a comma splice, and that is is used to connect the relative clause more naturally.

× A few tires in the morning during the launch time as well as the afternoon and at night.

✓ I feel tired a few times in the morning, during lunchtime, as well as in the afternoon and at night.

The original sentence has no subject or finite verb, so it is a sentence fragment. Add the subject I and the verb feel to form a complete sentence. The expression a few times is used to describe how often you feel tired.

× A few tires throughout the day.

✓ I feel tired a few times throughout the day.

This is also a sentence fragment because it does not contain a subject and a verb. Adding I feel makes it a complete sentence. A few times is the correct phrase for referring to repeated occasions.

× The Express Opsups of coffee, I mean.

✓ I mean, three espresso shots of coffee.

The original expression does not contain a complete subject-verb structure, so it is a sentence fragment. Adding I mean introduces the clarification properly. Three espresso shots is also the natural expression for this meaning.

× Yes, I always try to satisfy with my friends, whether male or female.

✓ Yes, I always try to spend time with my friends, whether they are male or female.

Satisfy does not normally mean spend time socially, and it cannot be used with with in this expression. Use spend time with or socialize with instead. The phrase whether they are male or female is more grammatically complete because it includes the subject and verb.