Tiredness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with correct tense and phrasing. Avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'mainly' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I usually feel tired every day, especially after work, mainly because my job is long and I have some minor health issues. For example, I often feel low on energy in the evenings and prefer to rest.

Gợi ý: Correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Begin with a direct answer (When/Where) and then explain with specific details. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' and correct verbs and nouns (e.g., 'exhausted', 'colleagues', 'nurses').

Ví dụ: I feel most tired at work because I have to speak with many people all day. For example, I talk to patients, doctors and nurses constantly, so the continuous conversation leaves me exhausted by late afternoon.

Gợi ý: Use correct verb forms and clear sequence words. Start with a topic sentence, then outline steps using linking words like 'first' and 'then'. Add one specific detail about how these activities help you.

Ví dụ: When I feel tired, I usually exercise for about thirty minutes at the gym and then relax in the sauna and swim a few laps. This routine helps me release tension and soothe my mind, so I feel more energetic afterwards.

Gợi ý: Make the refusal reason clear and correct word choice. Use one concise topic sentence and one supporting explanation. Replace unclear phrases with correct ones (e.g., 'turn down friends' invitations', 'entertain them', 'join conversations').

Ví dụ: No, I usually turn down my friends' invitations when I'm tired because I don't have the energy to socialize. I prefer to rest at home rather than risk being quiet and spoiling the evening.

× Yes, I do. I feel tired every day, especially after work. And I'm very easy to get tired now the day because maybe I'm getting older or because of my health problem I'm very easy to get tired

✓ Yes, I do. I feel tired every day, especially after work. And I get tired very easily nowadays; maybe because I'm getting older or because of health problems.

Incorrect use of adjective 'easy' and word order; tense and phrasing awkward. Use adverb 'easily' to modify 'get tired'; 'now the day' is incorrect — use 'nowadays'. Combine repeated ideas to avoid redundancy and use plural 'health problems' or 'a health problem' consistently.

× I feel exalted when I in my workplace because I have to talk with a lot of people, I have to talk to a lot of patients, doctors, nurse, dealing with people and talking a lot is it solders me a lot.

✓ I feel exhausted when I'm at my workplace because I have to talk with many people: patients, doctors, and nurses. Dealing with people and talking a lot drains me.

Multiple sentence structure issues: wrong word 'exalted' instead of 'exhausted'; missing verb 'am' in 'I in my workplace'; incorrect lists and articles ('nurse' -> 'nurses'); awkward clause 'is it solders me a lot' is unclear — replace with 'drains me'. Use 'many' for countable plural and proper punctuation to separate ideas.

× When I feel tired, I always go to the gym and doing some exercise about thirty minutes and after that I always go to the sauna and swimming pool.

✓ When I feel tired, I always go to the gym and do about thirty minutes of exercise; after that I go to the sauna and the swimming pool.

Parallel structure requires base verb 'do' after 'go to the gym and'. Use 'do' not 'doing'. Specify duration as 'about thirty minutes of exercise'. Include articles 'the' for 'swimming pool' where appropriate.

× It helped me to release and it soothe my mind.

✓ It helps me to relax and soothes my mind.

Tense should match habitual action: present simple 'helps' not past 'helped'. Use correct verbs: 'relax' (not 'release' in this context) and third person singular 'soothes' to agree with subject 'It'.

× No, absolutely not. I always refuse for my friend invitations if I'm tired because I don't want to go out if I don't have energy because it might be terrible if I can't give them fun wives and talk.

✓ No, absolutely not. I always refuse my friends' invitations if I'm tired because I don't want to go out when I have no energy; it would be terrible if I couldn't make them have fun or talk with them.

Remove incorrect preposition 'for' after 'refuse' and use possessive 'friends'' for invitations. Use 'when I have no energy' for condition. Use modal 'would' for hypothetical result and correct phrase 'make them have fun' or 'help them have fun' instead of 'give them fun wives and talk' which is incorrect and unclear.