Tiredness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity: produce a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and concise reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Specifically, say when and why you feel tired, e.g. mention early mornings and childcare duties. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often feel tired, especially in the mornings. Because I have to wake up early to prepare breakfast for my children and take them to school, I usually get less sleep. As a result, I feel low on energy until later in the day.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence and add specific details with linking words. Correct verb usage and avoid repetition. Mention typical situations (e.g. long runs, busy days) and frequency, and keep responses concise.

Ví dụ: I usually feel tired after long periods of physical activity. For example, when I go for a long run or have an intense gym session, I feel exhausted afterwards and need time to rest. Also, on very busy workdays I can feel drained by the evening.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear sequence and correct tense. Use linking words to show steps (first, then) and provide one or two specific activities that help you recover. Avoid repeating the same idea.

Ví dụ: When I feel tired, I usually listen to relaxing music first to calm down. Then I take a short nap or sleep for a few hours, which helps me recover my energy. If I can't sleep, I prefer to take a walk or drink a cup of tea to feel better.

× Yes, I often tired because I'm preparing breakfast for my kids and I I won't wake up early. So I pick up the I drop off

✓ Yes, I often feel tired because I'm preparing breakfast for my kids and I don't wake up early, so I pick them up and drop them off.

The student omitted the main verb 'feel' after 'often' and used incorrect future negative 'won't' instead of present habit 'don't'. Also pronouns for children were missing and the verbs for transporting children need objects and correct forms. Suggestion: use 'feel' for states, use present simple for habitual actions ('don't wake up early'), and include objects ('pick them up', 'drop them off').

× Well, for example, I run for a long time, I exercise for a long, long time. I feel exhausted. So I exercise it sometimes

✓ Well, for example, I run for a long time; I exercise for a long time and feel exhausted. Sometimes I stop exercising.

Repetition and awkward phrasing: 'I exercise for a long, long time' is redundant. 'I exercise it sometimes' is ungrammatical—'exercise' does not take 'it' here; likely intended meaning is to stop or take breaks. Use present simple for habitual actions and connect clauses properly. Suggestion: remove redundancy, use punctuation or conjunctions, and replace 'exercise it sometimes' with a clear verb phrase like 'stop exercising' or 'take breaks'.

× When I when I feel exhausted or tired I listening to music as and then I slept I sleep for a long time. After that I recover my condition. So sleeping

✓ When I feel exhausted or tired, I listen to music and then I sleep for a long time. After that, I recover my energy.

The student used 'I listening' (incorrect -ing form) instead of 'I listen'. 'I slept' mixes past with present habitual context; use present simple 'I sleep'. 'Recover my condition' is unnatural; 'recover my energy' is clearer. Suggestion: use base verb for present habits ('listen', 'sleep'), keep tense consistent, and choose natural nouns ('energy' instead of 'condition').