Tiredness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer clearer and more concise. Begin with a direct topic sentence (Yes, I do), then give one or two specific reasons using correct vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words (because, so) properly and avoid repetition. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. As a high school student I have a heavy workload and many extracurricular activities, so I often feel exhausted. For example, I study for exams in the evening and also attend club meetings, which leaves me drained by the end of the day.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and give specific examples of activities that make you tired. Use linking phrases (for example, because, after) and correct verb forms. Reduce filler words and keep the answer to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually feel tired at the end of the day, especially in the evening. After a full day of studying, exercising, and attending club activities, I often run out of energy and need to rest.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and describe one or two specific actions you take, using correct grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words (but, so) properly and avoid unclear phrases. Mention the name of the film or show clearly and explain briefly why it helps you relax.

Ví dụ: When I'm tired, I usually go to bed early to recover. If I can't sleep right away, I watch my favorite cartoon, Doraemon, because it helps me relax and take my mind off schoolwork.

× Yes I do because I'm such a high school student so I have I always have ton of excitement and protect to do every day and a lot of study performance I have to learn so I'll be very tired every day.

✓ Yes, I do because I'm a high school student, so I always have a lot of activities and projects to do every day and a lot of studying, so I get very tired every day.

This sentence has multiple sentence structure problems and issues with word choice. 'Such a high school student' is unnatural; use 'a high school student.' 'I have I always have' is a repetition error; remove extra words. 'Ton of excitement and protect' are incorrect collocations; use 'a lot of activities and projects.' 'Study performance I have to learn' is ungrammatical; rephrase as 'a lot of studying.' Use commas to separate clauses and change 'I'll be very tired' to 'I get very tired' to match habitual present tense. Suggestion: Break long ideas into clear clauses, use correct collocations (a lot of activities, projects, studying), and maintain consistent present-tense for habitual actions.

× So I usually feel tired at the end of the day. I mean in the evening or at night because after a day for doing so many things like study, do health work and some kind of things like that.

✓ I usually feel tired at the end of the day, in the evening or at night, because after doing so many things all day, like studying, doing chores, and other tasks, I feel exhausted.

The original has awkward phrasing and incorrect verb forms for activities. 'After a day for doing so many things' is ungrammatical; use 'after doing so many things all day.' 'Study' should be the gerund 'studying' and 'do health work' is unclear; 'doing chores' or 'doing household/health-related tasks' is better. Use consistent present tense for habitual actions and clearer vocabulary. Suggestion: Use gerunds for listed activities (studying, doing chores) and simplify 'after a day of doing so many things'.

× I feel very tired at the end because I've run out of energy.

✓ I feel very tired at the end because I run out of energy.

Mixing present habitual context with present perfect 'I've run out' is inconsistent. For habitual statements use simple present 'I run out of energy.' Present perfect implies a specific completed event; simple present is appropriate for regular occurrences. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual results: 'I run out of energy.'

× So actually when I feel tired I will go to the bed as early as I can, but if I can swit sleep I will turn on my favorite films.

✓ Actually, when I feel tired I go to bed as early as I can, but if I can't sleep I turn on my favorite films.

Use simple present for habitual actions instead of 'will.' 'Go to the bed' should be 'go to bed' (no article). 'If I can swit sleep' is ungrammatical: likely intended 'can't sleep.' Replace 'will turn on' with simple present 'turn on' for habitual behavior. Also correct spelling 'switch' not needed when meaning 'fall asleep'—use 'can't sleep.' Suggestion: Use simple present for regular routines, omit the article before 'bed,' and use 'can't sleep' for inability to fall asleep.

× That is Duraman my favorite cartoons from Japan.

✓ That's Doraemon, my favorite cartoon from Japan.

The name 'Duraman' is likely a mispronunciation; the well-known Japanese cartoon is 'Doraemon.' 'My favorite cartoons' is plural but refers to a single show; use 'cartoon' or 'one of my favorite cartoons.' Also contract 'That is' to 'That's' for natural speech. Ensure proper noun spelling. Suggestion: Verify proper noun spelling and match singular/plural: 'my favorite cartoon' or 'one of my favorite cartoons.'