Tiredness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve pronunciation and correct word choice ("try" → "tired"). Make the response more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons. Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often feel tired. By the end of the workday I usually feel exhausted because I have a heavy workload and several tight deadlines, which leaves me drained by late afternoon.

Gợi ý: Finish sentences and avoid fragments. Give a clear topic sentence and add a specific example or brief explanation using a linking word (e.g., "because," "so"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I usually feel most tired in the afternoon on workdays because I have many tasks to complete. For example, after several hours of meetings and focusing on deadlines, my energy tends to drop around 3–4 pm.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and avoid repeated words ("back and back"). Provide a clear topic sentence then one or two specific activities with brief reasons or results, linked logically (e.g., "so" or "which").

Ví dụ: When I feel tired, I usually go for a short walk to refresh my mind, and I often listen to music because it helps me relax and regain focus.

× Yes, I often feel try.

✓ Yes, I often feel tired.

The word 'try' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'tired' to describe a state of fatigue. Use the adjective form to modify 'feel'. Suggestion: Replace incorrect word with the appropriate adjective (tired).

× I usually get exhausted by the end of work day because I have a heavy workload and several tight deadlines, so I often feel drained by late afternoon.

✓ I usually get exhausted by the end of the workday because I have a heavy workload and several tight deadlines, so I often feel drained by late afternoon.

Missing definite article: 'work day' should be a single noun 'workday' or 'the workday'. Use 'the' to refer to the typical/expected workday. Also 'workday' is commonly one word. Suggestion: Use 'the workday' or 'the end of the workday'.

× I often feel tired in the afternoon of every work day because there are many tasks to complete within a day.

✓ I often feel tired in the afternoon of every workday because there are many tasks to complete during the day.

Use 'workday' as one word and 'during the day' is a more natural prepositional phrase than 'within a day' when referring to tasks spread over the daily period. This keeps present simple tense and meaning intact. Suggestion: Use 'workday' and 'during the day'.

× So in the afternoon is like the time that I.

✓ So the afternoon is usually the time when I feel tired.

The original sentence is incomplete and has incorrect word order. It lacks a main verb and object. Rephrase to a complete clause: 'the afternoon is usually the time when I feel tired' to convey meaning clearly. Suggestion: Ensure subject, verb, and complement are present.

× Normally I would go for a walk for a while and get back and back to work mode again, but more often I like to listen to the music.

✓ Normally I would go for a walk for a while and then get back into work mode, but more often I like to listen to music.

Redundant 'back and back' is incorrect; use 'get back into work mode' for the idiomatic expression. 'The music' is unnecessary general article; 'listen to music' is the natural phrase. 'Would' is acceptable for habitual past or hypothetical; here it can remain to indicate a typical reaction, but ensure clarity with 'then'. Suggestion: Use 'then' for sequence, 'get back into work mode', and omit 'the' before 'music'.

× It helped me relax and calm.

✓ It helps me relax and calm down.

Tense and word choice are off: the student is describing a habitual action, so present simple 'helps' is appropriate. 'Calm' as an adjective cannot follow 'relax' directly; the phrasal verb 'calm down' expresses the intended meaning. Suggestion: Use present tense 'helps' and the phrasal verb 'calm down'.