Tiredness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer natural and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “No, I don’t often feel tired.”), avoid double negatives, and give one specific reason with a linking word. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and correct small grammar errors (e.g., say “I used to be tired when I worked as a nurse in Japan”).

Ví dụ: No, I don’t often feel tired because I sleep and eat well. However, I used to feel very tired when I worked as a registered nurse in Japan, because my shifts were long and stressful.

Gợi ý: Be concise and avoid repetition. Provide one clear condition and a brief consequence using linking words like “when” or “so”. Use correct grammar (e.g., “when I can’t sleep well, I don’t rest properly, so I feel tired”).

Ví dụ: I feel tired when I can’t sleep well, so I don’t recover properly overnight. In that case, I usually try to relax early and go to bed sooner to get more rest.

Gợi ý: Organize your response: give one main action and one secondary action with linking words. Avoid repetition and finish your sentence. Use natural vocabulary (e.g., “I usually take a short nap and sometimes drink coffee during my break because it helps me feel alert”).

Ví dụ: When I feel tired, I usually take a short 20–30 minute nap to recharge. Also, I sometimes drink a cup of coffee during my break because it helps me feel more awake and focused.

× No I don't I feel not tired.

✓ No, I don't. I don't feel tired.

The student used a double negative 'don't' and 'not' which is incorrect; also pronoun/subject punctuation and sentence separation needed. Use standard negation: 'I don't feel tired.' Add punctuation to separate clauses.

× I don't feel not tired because I can sleep well and I can eat well.

✓ I don't feel tired because I can sleep well and eat well.

Double negative 'don't' + 'not' creates confusion; remove 'not'. Also parallel verbs don't need repeated 'I can' before 'eat well'. Keep present simple to describe habitual abilities.

× I used to be tired in Japan as working as a RN.

✓ I used to be tired in Japan when I worked as an RN.

Use past simple 'worked' after 'used to' for the past habit and use 'when' to connect clauses. Also article 'an' is correct, but 'as working as' is incorrect structure; use 'when I worked as an RN.'

× I feel tired when I can't when I can't sleep well, I can't rest well.

✓ I feel tired when I can't sleep well or rest properly.

Sentence is repetitive ('when I can't' twice) and lacks clear coordination. Combine ideas with 'or' and use adverb 'properly' for 'rest' to sound natural. Present simple and modal 'can't' are appropriate for habitual situations.

× So that at the time I would like to take a rest for me.

✓ So at that time I would like to rest.

Phrase 'So that at the time' is awkward; 'So at that time' is sufficient. 'Take a rest for me' is ungrammatical—use 'I would like to rest' or 'take a rest.' Keep pronoun use simple.

× I take a nap and take a I take a nap and I rest when I and I grab the coffee with rest time because it is poor it is good for my

✓ I take a nap and rest, and I grab a coffee during my break because it is good for me.

Original contains repetition, missing connectors, and incomplete ending. Remove repeated fragments, use 'during my break' instead of 'with rest time', and finish the sentence with 'it is good for me.' This corrects sentence structure and completes the thought.