Tiredness— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often feel tired?

Thí sinh

Yeah, if I had to answer to this question I would say that I am always tired, but I don't know about for what kind of problems I have to feeling tired all the time.

Giám khảo

When would you feel tired?

Thí sinh

Sometimes uh, I feel tired since I get up, but most often after lunch.

Giám khảo

What do you do when you feel tired?

Thí sinh

I get a coffee and if I have enough time I used to do a little power nap before. Start to work again.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you often feel tired?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Risposta: Sii più conciso e naturale. Inizia con una frase chiara che risponda direttamente alla domanda, poi aggiungi una o due frasi di dettaglio con ragioni possibili. Evita costruzioni grammaticali errate come "have to answer to" e "for what kind of problems I have to feeling"; usa invece strutture semplici e corrette. Limita la risposta a massimo 4-5 frasi.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often feel tired. I usually feel low on energy because I sleep late and have a busy schedule, so I struggle to recover fully. Lately I’ve been trying to improve my routine to see if that helps.

When would you feel tired?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: Risposta: Fornisci una risposta diretta con un breve dettaglio specifico e usa connettori semplici per chiarezza. Correggi espressioni come "since I get up" (usa "when I get up" o "from the moment I wake up"). Mantieni la risposta entro 3 frasi e aggiungi un esempio concreto del momento o della situazione.

Ví dụ: I sometimes feel tired from the moment I wake up, but more often I get sleepy after lunch. This usually happens when I have a heavy meal or a long morning of work.

What do you do when you feel tired?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Risposta: Rispondi direttamente e poi descrivi una o due azioni concrete in ordine logico. Evita tempi verbali errati come "used to do" quando intendi azione abituale nel presente; usa "I usually" o "I often". Collega le frasi con avverbi o congiunzioni per rendere il discorso coerente.

Ví dụ: I usually have a coffee, and if I have time I take a short power nap for about 20 minutes. After that I feel refreshed and can start working again.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Yeah, if I had to answer to this question I would say that I am always tired, but I don't know about for what kind of problems I have to feeling tired all the time.

✓ Yes, if I had to answer this question I would say that I am always tired, but I don't know what causes me to feel tired all the time.

The sentence contains several structural problems: unnecessary preposition 'to' after 'answer', awkward phrase 'about for what kind of problems', incorrect verb form 'have to feeling'. Suggestion: remove the extra 'to', use 'what causes me to feel' to express reason, and use 'feel' (base form) after 'to'. Also use 'Yes' instead of 'Yeah' in semi-formal speech. Grammar problem type ID:26

Present tense issue

× Sometimes uh, I feel tired since I get up, but most often after lunch.

✓ Sometimes, I feel tired as soon as I get up, but more often after lunch.

Using 'since' to mean 'from the time' is acceptable in some contexts but 'as soon as' is clearer here. Also 'most often' is acceptable but 'more often' sounds more natural in contrast. Suggestion: use 'as soon as I get up' for clarity and keep consistent adverb usage. Grammar problem type ID:6

Verb + -ing form

× I get a coffee and if I have enough time I used to do a little power nap before. Start to work again.

✓ I get a coffee and if I have enough time I take a short power nap before starting work again.

'Used to do' indicates a past habitual action and is not correct for a present routine. 'Do a little power nap' is unnatural; use 'take a short power nap'. The fragment 'Start to work again' lacks subject and proper form; use the gerund 'starting' after 'before'. Suggestion: use present simple for routines and correct verb patterns: 'take a nap' and 'before starting work again'. Grammar problem type ID:8

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Little— Short; Young; Brief; Minor
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