Tiredness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words to add one specific detail. Correct verb forms and uncountable noun usage (energy), and fix pronouns. Aim for 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often feel tired, especially after long periods of work. For example, after several hours at the office I have little energy left, so I usually need to rest to recover.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and precise examples, correct articles and plural forms (heavy boxes), and avoid irrelevant statements. Use a linking word to connect general rule to examples.

Ví dụ: I usually feel tired after physical tasks. For example, when I clean the house or lift heavy boxes I become exhausted and need a break.

Gợi ý: Organize answer with a topic sentence plus 2–3 specific actions. Correct grammar (When I feel tired), streamline phrasing and use linking words (first, then, also) to sequence actions. Use correct verbs and collocations (listen to calm music, watch my favorite movie, it helps me unwind).

Ví dụ: When I feel tired, I do a few things to recharge. First, I take a short nap to regain energy; then I listen to calm music or watch my favorite movie, and sometimes I go for a short walk because it helps me unwind and reduces my stress.

× Yes I do. I often feel tired especially after a long period of work activities.

✓ Yes, I do. I often feel tired, especially after a long period of work.

The sentence had redundant wording ('activities') and missing commas. Use simple noun 'work' to sound natural and add commas for clarity. Present simple is correct for habitual actions.

× I feel tired and I don't have a much energy to continue to others task and I'm feel exhausted to and my body need to rest at the moment.

✓ I feel tired and I don't have much energy to continue with other tasks, and I feel exhausted, so my body needs to rest at the moment.

Errors: 'a much energy' should be 'much energy' (no article with 'much'); 'others task' should be 'other tasks' (plural and correct adjective order); 'I'm feel' is incorrect verb form — use 'I feel'; 'my body need' requires third person singular agreement 'needs'. Also add conjunctions and commas to improve sentence structure and clarity.

× I feel tired after a physical task, for example when I clean my house or lift a heavy boxes.

✓ I feel tired after a physical task, for example when I clean my house or lift heavy boxes.

'a heavy boxes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'boxes'. Remove the article or make singular: 'a heavy box' or 'heavy boxes'. Plural 'boxes' fits general situations.

× At the moment I'm feeling so exhausted and don't have much energy to continue my way.

✓ At the moment I'm feeling very exhausted and don't have much energy to continue my day.

'so exhausted' is acceptable but 'very' is more natural here; 'continue my way' is unnatural — use 'continue my day' or 'carry on'. Maintain present continuous 'I'm feeling' for a current state.

× When I'm feel tired I try to do some a relaxing thing like I for example I try to take a short nap to recharge myself.

✓ When I feel tired, I try to do something relaxing; for example, I try to take a short nap to recharge myself.

'I'm feel' is incorrect; use 'I feel'. 'some a relaxing thing' is ungrammatical — use 'something relaxing'. Punctuation and word order corrected. Present simple 'I feel' suits habitual actions.

× After that I listen to a calm music or what my favorite movie and sometimes I go for a short walk because it filled me unwind and reduce my stress.

✓ After that I listen to calm music or watch my favorite movie, and sometimes I go for a short walk because it helps me unwind and reduces my stress.

Errors: 'a calm music' should be 'calm music' (uncountable, no article). 'what my favorite movie' should be 'watch my favorite movie'. 'it filled me unwind' is wrong; use 'it helps me unwind'. Verb agreement: 'reduce my stress' -> 'reduces my stress' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Improved connectors and verb forms for clarity.