Tiredness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more direct and concise in the topic sentence, avoid contradictory or unclear clauses (e.g. "especially now that I'm employed" then "most of the time I'm just at home" is confusing). Add a brief reason to support your answer and use a linking word. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Not really. I rarely feel tired at the moment because my work schedule is regular and not too demanding. Also, I spend most evenings at home relaxing, which helps me recover my energy.

Gợi ý: This answer is clear but could be improved by adding a linking phrase and a specific detail or example to make it more informative and natural. Use a topic sentence then expand with a brief example.

Ví dụ: I usually feel tired after doing household chores, especially when I clean the whole apartment on weekends. I also get tired after intense exercise, for example a long run or a spin class.

Gợi ý: Correct the grammar and verb forms, and organize the response with a topic sentence plus 1–2 supporting details linked by connectors. Avoid listing without structure and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: When I feel tired, I usually try to rehydrate and rest. For instance, I drink a glass of water and often take a short 20-minute nap; alternatively, I listen to calm music to help me relax.

× I drink water or sometimes I take a nap or listening to the music.

✓ I drink water or sometimes I take a nap or listen to music.

The sentence mixes base-form verbs and an -ing form in a coordinate structure. After 'or' parallel verbs should share the same form: 'drink', 'take', 'listen' (base form). Also 'the music' is unnecessary; use 'music' for general activity. To improve, keep verb forms parallel and drop the definite article when speaking about music in general.