Tiredness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, avoid contradictory or irrelevant phrases (e.g., “driving jolly”), and limit to a few well-linked supporting details. Use linking words (for example, but, however) correctly and choose appropriate vocabulary (excited, bored, frustrated) instead of incorrect collocations. Keep responses under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I don't often feel tired overall; it depends on what I am doing. For example, I feel excited and alert when I follow the stock market, but I get bored and tired when studying English for a long time. However, these feelings usually depend on how much sleep I had the night before.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and then two or three specific reasons with linking words. Reduce fillers (uh, umm) and be precise about times and activities—e.g., after heavy work, after exercise, late at night. Use concise phrasing and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I usually feel tired after doing a lot of work or after strenuous physical exercise. Also, I often feel sleepy late at night, especially around midnight, if I haven't rested well earlier in the day.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with one main action and a brief explanation or additional action. Cut hesitations and complete sentence endings (e.g., “take a short nap”). Use linking words (for example, if, when) to show contrast between night and afternoon routines. Add a specific detail about duration or benefit to improve coherence and content richness.

Ví dụ: When I feel tired at night, I usually go to bed earlier so I can get a full night's sleep and recover. If I'm tired in the afternoon, I take a short 20–30 minute nap on the sofa, which helps me feel refreshed for the rest of the day.

× It depends on different situations.

✓ It depends on the situation.

The original uses plural 'situations' awkwardly with 'depends on different'. Use the uncountable/neutral noun phrase 'the situation' or 'different situations' with rephrasing. Suggestion: say 'It depends on the situation' or 'It depends on different situations' with added context. This fixes article/word choice and improves naturalness.

× For example, when I check stock market I always feel exciting, but when I watch study English I feel very lousy driving jolly.

✓ For example, when I check the stock market I always feel excited, but when I study English I feel very lousy or unhappy.

Multiple errors: missing article 'the' before 'stock market' (use 17 or 22), wrong adjective 'exciting' (describes something that excites; 'excited' describes the person's feeling) — this is an adjective form issue (13) and verb/adjective choice. 'watch study English' is ungrammatical: use 'study English' (verb phrase) not 'watch study'. 'driving jolly' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'feeling jolly' or 'not jolly'. Here replacement with 'very lousy or unhappy' matches meaning. Suggestion: use 'check the stock market', use 'excited' for the person's feeling, and use 'study English' or 'watch English videos' depending on intended meaning.

× Sometimes I will feel tired, uh, for example, when I finished a lot of work or I do, uh, physical exercise, umm, I will feel umm, very tired and close to uh, 12:00 I will feel tired too.

✓ Sometimes I feel tired. For example, when I finish a lot of work or do physical exercise, I feel very tired, and around 12:00 I feel tired too.

Use simple present to describe habitual occurrences rather than 'will' (future) or mixed past 'finished'. Change 'I finished' to 'I finish' (present tense) and 'I do physical exercise' can be shortened to 'do physical exercise' or 'exercise'. Replace repeated 'will feel' with 'feel' for habitual actions. Also 'close to 12:00' should be 'around 12:00'. This fixes tense consistency (6 and 7) and sentence structure (26).

× When I feel tired at night, I usually go to bed early so I can get a full night, uh, full night's rest.

✓ When I feel tired at night, I usually go to bed early so I can get a full night's rest.

Redundant fragment 'a full night, full night's rest' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'a full night's rest' (uses possessive with night). This fixes article/phrase usage and sentence redundancy. Suggestion: use the standard collocation 'a full night's rest'.

× If I'm tired in the afternoon, I often lie on the sofa and take short nap to uh.

✓ If I'm tired in the afternoon, I often lie on the sofa and take a short nap.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'short nap' (article error). Also trailing 'to uh' is unfinished; remove it. Use 'take a short nap' which is the correct verb + noun phrase. This fixes article usage (22) and sentence completion (26).