Tiredness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Nội dung trả lời đã nêu lý do nhưng cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn; tránh tiếng ậm ừ (uh) và lỗi từ vựng; sửa cụm từ không chính xác (ví dụ “cons starting” không phù hợp). Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại áp lực, tần suất) và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Giữ không quá 5 câu.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often feel tired. Lately I’ve been stressed mainly because of academic pressure and some family conflicts. For example, I have tight deadlines for assignments and frequent arguments at home, which leave me mentally drained. As a result, I find it hard to concentrate during the day.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời nêu được nguyên nhân nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai (ví dụ “have go to school”, “health work”). Cần mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề, dùng liên từ để liệt kê hợp lý (for example, and, because) và đưa ra chi tiết cụ thể về thời điểm hoặc tần suất. Tránh câu rời rạc như “That's it.” và hạn chế tiếng ậm ừ.

Ví dụ: I usually feel tired in the evenings after a long day. For example, I go to school, then attend two extra classes every afternoon and spend several hours doing homework and studying, so by 9 pm I often feel exhausted.

Gợi ý: Ý tưởng tốt (nghỉ ngơi, nghe nhạc, giải trí) nhưng cần diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, dùng động từ phù hợp (take a deep breath, relax), tránh lỗi từ vựng (“the interesting in YouTube”) và lặp từ. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về loại nhạc hoặc thời lượng để câu rõ ràng hơn.

Ví dụ: When I feel tired, I usually take a few deep breaths and listen to relaxing music for about 20 minutes. Alternatively, I watch short, light-hearted videos on YouTube to distract myself and relax before going back to work.

× I often feel tired because I'm under a lot of pressure in my life, such as peer pressure or family conflicts. It makes me feel uh cons starting more difficult.

✓ I often feel tired because I'm under a lot of pressure in my life, such as peer pressure or family conflicts. It makes things start to feel more difficult.

The phrase 'cons starting' is incorrect and seems to be a speech error. The corrected phrase 'things start to feel more difficult' uses the noun 'things' and the verb phrase 'start to feel' which is grammatically correct. Suggestion: replace unclear fragments with a clear noun + 'start to' + verb structure to express increasing difficulty. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I feel tired when I can't cope with my daily routine because I have go to school, uh, attend extra classes and do a lot of health work and homework. That's it. Makes me tired a lot.

✓ I feel tired when I can't cope with my daily routine because I have to go to school, attend extra classes, and do a lot of housework and homework. That makes me very tired.

Missing auxiliary 'to' after 'have' is an error; the correct form is 'have to' for obligation (modal-like). 'health work' is likely incorrect word choice; 'housework' fits context. The fragment 'Makes me tired a lot' lacks a subject; change to 'That makes me very tired.' Suggestion: use 'have to' for obligations, choose correct nouns like 'housework', and ensure each sentence has a subject and verb. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I usually take a breath and uh, listen to music to calm down my feelings and I can surf the Internet or watch the interesting in YouTube.

✓ I usually take a deep breath and listen to music to calm down, and I can surf the Internet or watch interesting videos on YouTube.

'Take a breath' is grammatically acceptable but 'take a deep breath' is more natural. 'Calm down my feelings' is awkward; 'calm down' alone or 'calm my feelings' is better. 'Watch the interesting in YouTube' has incorrect article and preposition; use 'watch interesting videos on YouTube.' Suggestion: use natural collocations ('take a deep breath', 'calm down'), use 'on YouTube' for the platform, and include the correct noun ('videos'). Grammar problem type ID: 11}]} } PMID: N/A